I like the concept of the story, especially with the author's use of mythology, but the text was a bit hard to read, since it was sometimes a bit inconsistent. The flow of the story was okay, but at times it felt like there was a strange lump of information.

The storyline is very interesting and unique, but there are some grammatical errors here and there. Other than that, the writing style is very captivating, and really pulls you into the novel. The characters are great as well.

This story really reminds me of ORV, and the style of the writing is very unique and interesting. The characters are not my favorite, but everyone likes something different. I like how the story is funny, while also being serious when it needs to be. Sometimes, the writing got a bit repetitive, but overall, this novel was very good.

I like how this novel is very similar to ORV. I liked that story.

The story is off to a great start! Even though there are only three chapters so far, I'm already waiting for more. The characters each have these unique personalities that are both interesting and special (my personal favorite is Bell). I'm very excited to keep reading!

The writing is very, very, very detailed and easy to understand. It really pulls you into the wonderful world that the author has created. The characters have such realistic and interesting reactions that I could not stop reading! I liked the concept and the cover (of course), but the writing really brought out everything that I was looking for. Great job!

I think the overall novel has been getting better with each rewrite. I like the story a lot more now, and the writing has gotten smoother as the author gets more experienced. Great job!

The world building was wonderful, and I felt like I was really inside the story. The introduction into the story was very well done, and it was really smooth.

The writing is very good! I love how descriptive the author is. The story progresses at the perfect pace, and the characters are so interesting! I'm so attached to Lucy already.

I enjoyed this story very much. It was a bit slow in the beginning, but it got a lot better as I progressed. The characters were very realistic. The quality of writing was also very good. I think I liked the overall idea of the story, but the author really brought it to life!

The writing style has a lot of personality, but it does seem a bit awkward and random at times. The writing is more casual and less formal, leading the reader to a deeper understanding of the main character. There are a few grammatical errors here and there, but the story is pretty good overall. There is only one chapter, but I'm sure the author will come out with more chapters soon.

I liked the emojis the author used while writing. The writing style is a bit chaotic, making the story a bit hard to keep up with, but it also has a lot of energy and emotion, making the tone of the story very upbeat and positive overall (the comedy aspect of it really shines through). There's a lot of dialogue, which is not bad, but I would like if the author would describe more of the characters and scenery, etc. The story feels a bit like a script at some points, since the author uses colons sometimes when writing about who is speaking. This makes the story feel a bit inconsistent, since the dialogue is switching between two styles of writing, but it gets better a few chapters in. I think that a bit more paragraphing could be beneficial, but ultimately, it's the author's choice. There are a few grammatical errors here and there, but nothing too bad. I have nothing to say about the characters, other than how interesting and human they were. They each had their own flaws and hilarious moments. The story was quite interesting, and I found myself finishing the whole 25 chapters.

I think the concept is very intriguing, but the characters are a bit cliched. Otherwise I think this novel is very good. I'm excited to read more!

I think there has definitely been improvement after the rewrite. The writing quality is very smooth and satisfying, without any mistakes. The story itself has always been really good too :D

Also, I like pretty cover art, and this cover is really pretty :D

The world building is amazing, and Constantine is such a great character. The story is really satisfying, and easy to read. All the characters are really well written, and the story as a whole is becoming one of my favorites.

The writing quality could be improved a bit, but otherwise, I think this book is practically perfect. The entire world is well set up, and I would totally recommend this book.

Very impressed by the wonderful storyline that has been laid out, and the writing quality is great too. The story as a whole is very interesting and I'm very excited to read more. Great job! P.S. I love the cover.

This is such a good story. I absolutely love the characters, and the male lead is just really handsome!!! The writing is really good, and the cover art is just downright amazing. This was a wonderful story to read.

I don't know...hmm...