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The writing style has a lot of personality, but it does seem a bit awkward and random at times. The writing is more casual and less formal, leading the reader to a deeper understanding of the main character. There are a few grammatical errors here and there, but the story is pretty good overall. There is only one chapter, but I'm sure the author will come out with more chapters soon.

ELEMENTO : THE SUPREME GOD OF THE NATURE

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thank you i will work on my mistake