Really enjoying the story up to this point! I haven't spotted many grammar mistakes, and I've gotta say, you're churning out those chapters like a champ! 😄 My only suggestion would be to take your time with the plot development. 📖👍

Honestly the first chapter is very well done, excited for this one. However, I would recommend you increase the chapter updates per day otherwise gaining traction would be difficult.

ill stick around, sounds interesting.