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Honestamente creo que cometí algunos errores en cuanto a la trama, aún estoy viendo cómo podría arreglarlo pero no sé si es posible
I think it is explained very well in the chapters where the topic was addressed (I recommend reading them again), but to clarify completely, Killgrave's power consists of using a special pheromone that his body produces to control others (humans). He does not control their minds; his victims are fully aware of what Killgrave makes them do, trapped in their own bodies without being able to resist and only able to watch. At the same time, this pheromone loses potency over time due to the immune system, but this takes a very, very long time. Jessica Jones, being superhuman, was able to develop immunity in a shorter period, though it still took her some time. Even so, it is possible to become immune. With that, it should be clear that any species that is not human is immune to Killgrave since his pheromones only work on humans, just as animal pheromones only work on those of the same species. Likewise, any human with a superior healing/regeneration ability could develop immunity to these pheromones. For example, if it had not been Jessica but rather someone like Wolverine, whom Killgrave encountered and controlled, then due to his super regeneration, Wolverine would have become immune in a matter of days, and Killgrave would have signed his own death sentence. As a final note, mind control does not work on Daniel, and this is something specified in the early chapters. His mind and soul are protected by his core (I also recommend rereading the first chapters for further clarification).
The real name of killgrave
A supernatural arc with vampires, werewolves and stuff like that wouldn't be bad but it requires a certain level of preparation and time, it's still a bit early.
Peter still needs some character development but even though his initial intentions aren't entirely noble he's still trying to do the right thing.
Honestly, I stopped reading things about Spiderman a few years ago since I never found anything that seemed good to me, so I'm not that tired of him and in fact he is one of my favorite characters, I understand that some people don't like him but I won't stop writing about him since I have always planned him as one of the important characters in the story.
Starting a relationship is a little early, but in a certain sense he will stop seeing her as a child and will begin to trust her more.
The truth is that I don't remember exactly the meaning of that term, but it's something like stealing someone else's partner, right? Well, if they're not a couple to begin with, then it doesn't count. Remember that in this story, Susan and Reed haven't even met.
There are many opponents I have thought of
I thought about answering with a few things but I realized it might be a spoiler, even so I must say that all the 'points' you raise are actually not correct, John's conversation with the Ancient One lasted quite a while, not to mention that he didn't travel from one second to the next into space, but rather he flew enjoying the trip without hurrying because from his perspective nothing bad was happening. About his senses, you realize he was in space right? How can he sense what could be happening on the planet if he's literally in the vacuum of space? No Superman, his hearing doesn't cover the earth nor does he have x-ray vision. Finally, the casualties you're referring to... do you realize that up to now the only really important character who's not here anymore is Hank? And we all know he's not dead, right?