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The first chapter was so good i like how you began your story
I think this nobel has some great features it well written so easy to understand i like Evey single chapter 0f it i enjoyed it very much keep doing a hard work
You did a pretty good job knowing that's your first novel really.i enjoyed all the chapters im rooting for you to do more and don't stop updating i want to see what's coming next