The Chronicles of the Eldritch War

the novel follows the journeys of several characters as they navigate the challenges of survival and growth.it rich history and culture that is both fascinating and believable.

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You did a pretty good job knowing that's your first novel really.i enjoyed all the chapters im rooting for you to do more and don't stop updating i want to see what's coming next

I really enjoyed the the last 3 chapters it was kinda of a good novel i have great expectation for it hope you will continue to do some great chapters in the next

well its my first novel i hope you enjoy the the novel although its kind of a knowable genre i hope you guys to support my work and i hope you enjoy my novel

I really enjoyed your novel its interesting how good you wrote it please continue to do more

what a novel bro keep it up i appreciate your work please dont stop posting i love the novel like this i would to read more your novel anyways keep it up !!

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It's a book worth reading, the characters are good, each with their own Dynamics, even though it's a new book, it is really a good book, I am expecting a lot out of it.

Knowing that it is your first novel, you have done an absolutely amazing job! I really like the way the story has been written and how the characters are well explained! Keep up the amazing work! <3

I always appreciate a book like this. A MC who's not obviously overpowered at first and finds his way in many struggles to obtain power. I hope that the author can maintain this good development as the story goes.

I liked the beginning to ne frank it wasn't generic like others. but the pacing is very slow for me and there is tension which makes me want to come back to read this book. so i think you can do better.

I hope you maintain your excitement and that you develop your story masterfully. I like the theme and want to keep following the story. Good luck and keep it up.

The grammar needs some work but the story has promise. The struggle between the with and without magic has lots of potential

Your story plot was both fascinating and refreshingly unique, and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. However, I would suggest enhancing the grammar to provide an even more immersive and seamless reading experience. Additionally, I like your book cover! Keep up the good work, and I look forward to seeing more from you!

This book is a powerful piece of literature that brilliantly blends an absorbing narrative with complex characters. The plot is expertly crafted, introducing surprising twists that add layers of intrigue and keep readers riveted. The author's command of language and imagery further enriches the story, drawing readers into the heart of the narrative. The characters are compelling, their arcs interwoven with the plot in a way that feels authentic and poignant. Not just a captivating read, the book delves into deep, thought-provoking themes, inciting reflection. A harmonious fusion of gripping storytelling and intellectual depth, this book stands out as a 5-star masterpiece.

I'm rating 5-star because thus book surpasses the 5-star criteria. From the character design to the world development. It's definitely THE book for me. I recommend

I could tell that it was such a nice read. But because you're 'telling' a story, emotions don't make impact. If you utilize 'Show, don't tell,' even with your first 3 chapters, it will gather readers and even a contract easily. About the storyline, I have questions like the possibility of betrayal, but it was later answered to fill the plot hole. Still, I have issue about the early resolution of the internal conflict of character plots. If you've read 'Iseleve (a trash novel),' you should know what to avoid. From your first two chaps, that might be the case, so make sure that the character is installed with internal conflicts to make the story running longer. Your novel has a potential and can relate readers in proper execution.

(For some reason my review was deleted so had to write again) Came across this book on the forum and I must say that I am captivated by your writing style. The action scenes are not just about spectacle; they serve as reflection of the character’s inner struggle and growth. I am waiting for more chapters to come out, keep up the good work!

The novel has decent start-up and backing, it has pretty great potential. With how the story is developing I am sure it will become a great novel.