DaoistDumbles
I woke up to reality and found there is nothing more enjoyable than light novel
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Whaaat? He cant even do that by now? What about all his wandless stuff??
How?
*gotten hold
*as well.
*it
to, given
Do a ‘,’ instead of a new paragraph
hence the term mask
of it, as it
Only on why and not how?
Just ‘In the second week’
No ‘spend’ necessary
* practice
*end
Can a heir do that?
What? Why would he do that?? What about not changing plot not matter how small the change?
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Well… Title is somewhat misleading, due to his ancestry There are some obvious grammatical mistakes Some plot holes/lore errors (some pretty annoying ones) Overall , solid writing, idea and fanfic + a nice read so far👍 Sadly, not one of my favs so far, as I like lore correctness Still, give it a try Dear author, keep up your efforts 👍👍 Unfortunately, I like the Loki ff way more