Lingering_Starfire
Why do I write? Well, aside the fact that it's fun, I guess it's also because I want to connect as many people and their thoughts together?
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Lingering_Starfire1dコメントBut he had his powers then, right? If he was in the house, he'd probably be able to save everyone... no?
That had been the day he had been called to the mayor's mansion along with the other 3. Had that not been the case, he would have most likely died in his house too.- Lingering_Starfire1dに返信 ADRICK
Same
"Sure, tomorrow we can—" Bradley paused. "Right, tomorrow is the announcement. No matter, we can train around the time the sky gets bright. We will have to return by the time the sun is up though." - Lingering_Starfire1dに返信 _The_Collector
lol, perhaps
The moment the Crawler pulled out its limb from the ground and the large chunks of rocks were thrown in Bradley's direction, he closed his eyes. Unlike others, he couldn't see when he was intangible, so he had to rely on the very drowned-out sounds that he heard when he was in that state. - Lingering_Starfire1dに返信 F_E_X_A
I don't get it...
When he made someone intangible, he also made whatever was touching that person intangible as well, namely his clothes. Confusingly, however, rocks, metals, glass, and a few other things didn't become intangible even if the person was touching them. - Lingering_Starfire2dに返信 Krishna_Choubey
fax
As soon as he ate, an explosion of flavor bombarded the inside of his mouth, forcing him to eat more and more. He ate some more noodles, bit on a piece of meat, and cut off a piece of the egg before eating it. - Lingering_Starfire3dに返信 ToshiroOne
Normally, those stars separate events in a narrative or separate different timelines or smth. Depends on the context of the chapter, I think.
* * * * * - Lingering_Starfire3mthに返信 JBFIRE_77
Goodness. I haven't been able to continue with writing because of a few things I've had to take care of. So sorry for the late response T-T. Now to answer your question... Romance does exist in this novel, but it's not really hammered on and the little romance is the kind that allows the characters to grow even stronger. In a general sense however, you probably wouldn't feel it as much as in some other novels XD.
- Lingering_Starfire7mth発表
I'm fairly new to writing and decided to try something out online. 'Soul:A!' isn't going to be as long a story as the other novels, but I hope anyone who reads it will find it interesting! Since I'm a bit new to this, it would also help if I received feedback on how I could get better. I'm open to any form of constructive criticism ^^. Thank you for reading!
- Lingering_Starfire10mthに返信 Meta_SageCh 1 Trigger the Infinity within
- Lingering_Starfire10mthに返信 HotAsianBoyCh 1 Trigger the Infinity within