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younghand

younghand

Lv3
2023-05-19 入りましたUganda
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ライティング

18h

読書の

63

本を読む

バッジ

5

瞬間

14
  • younghand
    younghand3mth
    発表

    This book is totally worth it. I must say, I'm not even half way through but I'm hooked. I can't wait to continue. The only advise I have for guys out there, try it out right now.

    EDEN LOCKER 'S MAGUS SYSTEM {I-XI} And THE BLACK CREST FAMILY
    ファンタジー · Ninestar619_5803
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  • younghand
    younghand3mth
    発表

    Riveting! And as an apology for probably sounding pretentious, I'll tell you this story is amazing. I really hope it continues to keep on my toes. Its only nine chapters in, but so good. We need more material. Good job so far though author.

    The Red Queen of Nothing
    ファンタジー · JaneSmitten
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  • younghand
    younghand3mth
    に返信 Darja_Renen

    Oh, thanks I'll work on it at once

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  • younghand
    younghand3mth
    に返信 Darja_Renen

    Hey. I rewrote the first chapter. Check it out and give me your thoughts. Hope it's better than the first version.

    この本は削除されました。
  • younghand
    younghand3mth
    発表

    Interesting , is what I'd like to say, but thats an understatement. The novel has potential to be great, and the writing style is good, minimal grammatical errors. I can't wait to see how it progresses. Keep it up author.

    Tales of a Detestable Noble
    ファンタジー · Hydra_Gairum
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  • younghand
    younghand3mth
    発表

    Just the kind of story I was looking for. Thank you so much author. I really like the way they met. In truth, I've only read upto the fifth chapter, but I'd like to take my time with this.

    She fell for her NPC lover! (Mature version 18+)
    ファンタジー · Darja_Renen
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  • younghand
    younghand3mth
    発表

    Good beginning, good style, nice world building and I can't wait to see where this is going. Keep up the good work, author.

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  • younghand
    younghand3mth
    発表

    A dark vibe going on. But yeah, I really like your style. The first chapter was a bit long though. Normally those should have been two chapters, at least by webnovel standards. Anyway, keep up the good work.

    OH, VIOLENT BODHISATTVA
    東方 · IKECARODEV
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  • younghand
    younghand3mth
    コメント

    Solid second chapter. Lets keep going.

    Ch 2 To Protect
    Astral Prodigy: The Reincarnated Genius in the Shadows
    ファンタジー · Ranch64
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  • younghand
    younghand3mth
    発表

    I love the story. Not because I'm writing in a similar genre. Your style is solid and your plot captivating. Keep up the good work

    Astral Prodigy: The Reincarnated Genius in the Shadows
    ファンタジー · Ranch64
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  • younghand
    younghand4mth
    に返信 fat_gamer

    Thank you for the feedback. Will do

    この本は削除されました。
  • younghand
    younghand4mth
    発表

    A gripping story, really. So far I'm hooked on how the story is progressing. There were a few issues with some sentence patterns, but a little editing and you're golden.

    The strongest human is a cheater
    ファンタジー · Albinus_istamar
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  • younghand
    younghand4mth
    発表

    I loved it from the beginning. There was already tension right from the prologue. Let's hope it just gets better

    この本は削除されました。
  • younghand
    younghand4mth
    発表

    I like your dialogue style. Im a bit jealous of how easy it is to read your work, but yeah. Hopefully it just keeps getting better.

    Football-Ballon d'or or die [Gacha System]
    スポーツ · fat_gamer
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