Razed
Just a humble writer/reader. (ꏿ﹏ꏿ;)
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Razed11mthコメント😀✂️Cut'em
"Don't shake so much boy, I know you can't wait for it." The big one said, grabbing his dick and rubbing it in my face. The smell from it was disgusting, I can feel that this was a stick of disease that was being rubbed on my face.- Razed1yr発表
(Read chapters 1–10)Transmigrated Into the Body of the Prince Consort is a good novel (by my standards), with characters easy to understand by the way they spoke and conversed. But that is where I became a bit confused when I first read the story. The use of words during character dialogues is too informal and casual considering who spoke, like using "guys.". I highly suggest replacing "guys" (just my humble opinion). Character dialogue takes up most of the story itself, and the characters are simply narrating the happenings in the story. The description is very vague at various settings. This is not my first time reading an eastern novel setting, but it may confuse readers who have not read similar stories before. Like the "Palace," which could be imagined as a Western Palace or Eastern Palace if not properly described. Overall, for me, this novel is good and only needs a few tweaks here and there (especially the dialogue and setting description).Anyways, keep it up Author(✯ᴗ✯)
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Nice
-I don't have any intention of changing the plot at the very beginning, so I will just lend him a hand so that I can stay alive when he kills everyone in this household. - Razed1yr発表
A great start. This will be my rating as of now, but it may change in the future. The world introduction is great and simple to understand.Hoping for more chapters. Bye~❤️
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Ehhh... This was the last chap...Anyway, great! I'll be waiting for the next chap(ﾉﾟ0ﾟ)ﾉ~
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💀
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We were just born, as part of the grand scheme of nature. Nothing special. We were made to breed and to continue the line of humanity.–Razed
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Owwww big( ╹▽╹ )
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Good good, no melons( ꈍᴗꈍ)
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Good plan(｡•̀ᴗ-)✧
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... ಥ╭╮ಥ
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Beautiful~(｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡
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Huh... I thought this was literally the end🙂 Good thing read further(╬☉д⊙)⊰⊹ฺ
この本は削除されました。 - Razed1yrコメントAfter almost a minute of pounding the brown creature, a notification finally appeared before Skullius.
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oh...no😀
[Hahahahahahaha. What stats?]. - Razed1yrコメント
That was... anticlimactic
"ARRRGHHHHHH! I rushed up to a nearby rock and.....sat down. - Razed1yrコメントSprawled all across the ground were leafling remains; feet, little bits of leafling flesh, and even a few larger chunks of body. His mind went blank, and his knees gave way. He punched the ground repeatedly, scraping the flesh off his fists, but none of that could reverse what had been done.
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He outsmarted his outsmarting😆
Then he heard Bryan speak to him in a righteous tone, "Old thief, how dare you try to rob someone right in front of the Church? I shall deliver punishment on behalf of the Goddess." After that, Bryan delivered a few kicks to his butt and then took the suitcase and walked towards the middle-aged blond man standing not far away. - Razed1yrコメント
poor mole...🥲
He felt his anger subside as he watched the mole's body fly through the air, but when he regained his composure, he took a brief pause before chasing after the mole he had just kicked into the air. ''Wait, you're now my precious loot too, you can't go anywhere. ''