Hi, I've been writing for a few years now, I have a Wattpad account but I'm moving to Webnovel for more exposure.
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It's a really nice developing story. I love how the story started, the story telling is descriptive and great too. Keep it up, author!
thankss ^^ im glad to hear that
Thanks! I'll reupdate the better version later :)
I love the story, the plot got me really invested. The writing skill is also great, great job!
Definitely adding this to my library. 💯 Can't wait for more chapters, keep it up author!
I love how you describe things very detailed so the reader can imagine it clearer in their head. It makes the reading more enjoyable
It's a great chapter. Got me hooked since the beginning
Thank you so much for the feedback. I'll be updating again soon ^^
It's a sequence of imaginary or real images, smth like a dream