Narcotraffic

I love the story, the plot got me really invested. The writing skill is also great, great job!

I love the story so much the story line is just amazing

Really good book! I can't wait for more chapters. I enjoyed reading it. There's also a lot of improvement from your previous book!

The writing style isn't bad, and the plot is unique. However, the story isn't descriptive at all. Events and people aren't described well at all, and the story feels very rushed. The characters don't take their time expressing their emotions through either actions, words, or even monologues. It's quite bland. That's what I can say. If these issues are addressed, especially the issue of all the character's interactions feeling like only one minute or so. One good thing is that the dialogue doesn't feel too rigid, and the grammar and punctuation are on point, although I don't really like books written in the first person. 3.0/5.0... Keep up the good work 👍

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. There sophistication in the characters. The author's writing was great, not too much (too descriptive), just enough to convey the intention and the emotions of the characters. The pacing was great too, enough action and mystery to make readers continue reading. Keep up the great job dear author!

I love this book, it's really so interesting and I really do want to keep on reading it .. Author please don't stop writing, please, you have a fan 😊

I loved the idea, this genre is kinda alien to me, but i really did enjoy reading it and was very invested by the end of the 5th chapter. The story shows promise, but the pacing feels uneven throughout. At times, the narrative rushes ahead, while other parts seem to drag. Despite these flaws, the writing is solid, and the storyline is engaging. Overall, this book has the potential to be a real page-turner.

Here is the new review. Sorry for deleting the last one. So far when I read, I thought I would not like this. But it was an enjoyable read. Nico is perfect example of grey shaded character. Overall, I enjoyed reading it. All the best author.

Although this genre of novel is not my cup of tea, it was interesting and sequence of events is well planned. You want to know more about the story.

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I had just finished your book, "without its beauty" and I have to say there's been so much development since then. This is a lovely book and I can't wait for more chapters to be uploaded.

Author here! I want to say thank you to everyone that read this book. Please give me honest reviews. Thanks for reading!