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Mxna_9mthに返信 StarParagonLol, In the original draft that did happen, but I ignored that rule as it won't make sense since nobody can actually join the game anymore after that and it'll be a good plot device in the future.
『ADAM------』- Mxna_9mthコメント
I've been indecisive with how his name should be spelt... but I've decided that it's with a "Z" now and not an "S" so ignore the mistake if you encounter it in future...
"Perfect, im going to hide anyway, I'm the weakest in the group for a reason." Vari said as he halted, turned around and started walking away and Kaizen followed him. - Mxna_10mthに返信 pockyslee
The tiers are for the Demons. I will explain that eventually. I just didn't want the info dump in the first ten chapters to be outrageous.Also, I'll definitely flesh out the story, it's still at the 11th chapter anyway.Also, I understand this trope might be generic, but I promise to make it worthwhile 🦇THANKS FOR READING
Ch 10 Scenario 0.1 (4): Valeria - Mxna_10mthに返信 Mxna_
- Mxna_10mthに返信 Blazzing18
Tbf, my synopsis needs work, I'll get on that immediately.Also, at this stage, romance isn't the first thing in anyone's mind, neither are a lot of people thinking about getting as many girls as possible (At least Our MC doesn't think that). Essentially, from now to about, 20-35 chapters in, the MC has but a few things on his mind, and none of them involve one or multiple romantic/sexual companions.Oh and also, please stick around, I'll try to make it worthwhile.
- Mxna_10mthに返信 Romance_guy
- Mxna_11mthに返信 SleepySmile
Lol, it's one of my biggest inspirations anyway, but that was a coincidence lol.I do have another book that does have more obvious inspiratory homage and stuff...
Overly-Immersive Virtual Reality {OVR} of otherwise unattainable proportions became a possibility now within reach. - Mxna_11mthコメント
Similar.Translation: Foolish. Stupid Guy, Stupid Guy, Stupid Guy.
この段落は削除されました。 - Mxna_11mthコメント
Oh yeah and this is Spanish.Translation: "Foolish. Stupid, Stupid, Stupid. You Have Killed Us, Stupid!"if you think I should add the translation in the chapter itself next time, just like this and I will
この段落は削除されました。 - Mxna_11mthに返信 VRMMO_magnutt
Near-death, moribund, End-of-life...those were the best I could think of, But dying just fit better... I would've used Moribund, but it sounds out of place lol
In fact, its ratings increased drastically and more than ninety percent of the population were playing this game. Young, old. Living and dying. - Mxna_11mthに返信 UrekSenpa1
Not dead lol...You can understand it as people who are on their deathbed, who choose to play this game to feel like they aren't on their deathbed...hence dying
In fact, its ratings increased drastically and more than ninety percent of the population were playing this game. Young, old. Living and dying. - Mxna_11mthに返信 Heavens_Ending
You're right about that tho, lol
"Sorry about the Saitama wannabe's outburst, no hard feelings alright?" Moon walked towards Adam, he was a rather short, dark skinned and dark-haired male, he had really young-looking face despite his friends Vari and Kaiser seeming significantly older. - Mxna_11mthに返信 UrekSenpa1
That*thanks for noticing anyway.
この段落は削除されました。 - Mxna_11mthコメント
Just a lovely light-hearted warning... The system is so nice 🤧💕
この段落は削除されました。 - Mxna_1yrに返信 RengozCh 2 END (2)
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