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ShoTen

ShoTen

Lv12

Thank You!!

2023-01-28 入りましたGlobal
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  • ShoTen
    ShoTen4d
    コメント

    how?

    Yuki stood up and stretched, feeling a sense of fatigue after a long day. She had already packed Ken's lunch for tomorrow so it was now time to head to bed.
    Major League System
    スポーツ · leeroycgna
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  • ShoTen
    ShoTen4mth
    発表

    very short chapter, no sense of connectivity. the promotion of patrons is pushed too much! at least have 100 or 200 chapters then people might consider buying it

    A Modern Prince in Ancient India
    歴史 · AARYAN_PATHAK
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  • ShoTen
    ShoTen4mth
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    You can just shorten his name to Kazu while writing or using pronouns! It's a hindrance and exhausting to read the full name.

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    Crossing Into Japan, I Meet An Eccentric Family
    都市 · Tokinoshi
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  • ShoTen
    ShoTen4mth
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    Crossing Into Japan, I Meet An Eccentric Family
    都市 · Tokinoshi
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  • ShoTen
    ShoTen4mth
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    she just doesn't have any role at this point, haiyaa!

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  • ShoTen
    ShoTen4mth
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    it suddenly turned dark

    I stapled his dick so many times that the tip of his dick was completely lying flat on the chair and looked like a ugly mutated pancake.
    God of Milfs: The Gods Request Me To Make a Milf Harem
    都市 · AGodAmongMen
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  • ShoTen
    ShoTen4mth
    発表

    Okay, so far my review of the story!The main character at the initial phase was a simp, but he knew that was for money so it worked.Next the story progressed well until he met the first female lead, from there I felt the story took a strange turn(I mean, the decision well mc was taking), the mc was just using women and there was no connection at all.Some of you might say, mc is cold, no he is just a beta guy. You see there is no clear connection or clear disconnection. the readers are in confusion.That's why the story is not bitten to the point.The office dynamics is really good, but look there is no variation. Females are being introduced then forgotten.It's just your average story about rags to riches. nothing more.

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  • ShoTen
    ShoTen4mth
    に返信 I_Am_YourDad

    in synopsis

    1650 Hampi Vijayanagara Empire Mahanavami Dibba.
    Reborn In 17th century India with Black Technology
    歴史 · Mithun_ReddyGaru
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  • ShoTen
    ShoTen4mth
    に返信 SuryaputraKarna

    ok

    1650 Hampi Vijayanagara Empire Mahanavami Dibba.
    Reborn In 17th century India with Black Technology
    歴史 · Mithun_ReddyGaru
    detail
  • ShoTen
    ShoTen4mth
    に返信 I_Am_YourDad

    didn't he mention everything was fictional and it doesn't resemble reality.

    1650 Hampi Vijayanagara Empire Mahanavami Dibba.
    Reborn In 17th century India with Black Technology
    歴史 · Mithun_ReddyGaru
    detail
  • ShoTen
    ShoTen4mth
    コメント

    chief and sir in one sentence?

    Ram, a researcher in the ISRO Mars program said, "Chief, we are ready, sir."
    Reborn In 17th century India with Black Technology
    歴史 · Mithun_ReddyGaru
    detail
  • ShoTen
    ShoTen4mth
    コメント

    she?

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  • ShoTen
    ShoTen4mth
    コメント

    edgy

    I didn't know how to respond at first, so in the end, I responded with the only thing in mind, "You."
    Shota's Isekai NTR Adventure
    ファンタジー · DXHaseoXD
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  • ShoTen
    ShoTen4mth
    コメント

    you can WhatsApp

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  • ShoTen
    ShoTen4mth
    コメント

    who else want her to get fucked by mr brian

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  • ShoTen
    ShoTen4mth
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    she might reveal herself as true boss behind kent's company

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  • ShoTen
    ShoTen4mth
    コメント

    I like disloyal mc.

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  • ShoTen
    ShoTen4mth
    コメント

    basically she used her body as a ladder for success, must be nice. why can't boys do the same?

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  • ShoTen
    ShoTen4mth
    に返信 Shaq_Fu

    she is a back door user.... hahahh

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  • ShoTen
    ShoTen4mth
    コメント

    feels like the author is a woman, that only justifies his pov of mc

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