Dominique_Kirkman
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I don’t like how like how mc and Marceline stick together until they force to split up and they won’t be able to see each other again that one of them thinks the other one them dies and the searth each other never find each othe later when they’re like hundred years later they meet again , but they friend but don’t really need each other good help when needed sorry for the rant it it just idk I just think Idea for something but it kinda feel forced because I don’t know to to describe its smooth reading then one the very forced
Forshadeing?
My mind literally shut when read this sentence
I’m so confused the story is all over the place my suggestion remake the as this as draft that you can in because you know with Diana and her mother in how she was asking what she likes then wheth edger ariving but idk I just dost feel complete
I’m sick of of his attitude it ok but going turn me away and him being kinda of simp to leah