XxBadWoolfxX

hold up, monster

Despite some problems such as: the group's discussions are never in-depth and they always opt for the MC's silly method. The boring internal monologues where she repeats the same thing she always says about being a ghost and such. And what bothers me most is when the system appears and it's simply a chapter about attributes, don't get me wrong, I always read it and I love seeing the evolution, but it seems that the author uses this device every time he runs without creativity to finish So the chapter , if it showed the system and had a continuation of the story, I wouldn't mind; Anyway, it's a good novel, but the monologue issue was almost overcome and came back more irritating than ever. May the author prosper and continue to evolve his writing

I dropped it in chapter 169, I simply can't take this novel anymore, I feel nothing but anger towards the characters, especially the MC who, besides being a pervert on any woman that appears, has endless shallow monologues that don't deepen the character, I honestly I just hope she dies and this ends soon. The group's internal "conflicts" always end in 2 paragraphs and always end with everyone agreeing with the MC's "wonderful" idea. It just seems like a wish-fulfillment novel only worse, if you can make it worse. Every time a new internal conflict of the character appeared I couldn't care, the part where she feels more and more monstrous I just wanted her to go fuck herself, she acts like a 15 year old girl who only has hormones and eyes for beautiful people, since chapter 98 I start to hesitate to go to the next one because I know that I'm going to get angry and even so I tried to bear it but I couldn't, I haven't read other books by the author but if the dialogues are at this level in the other books So dialogue is certainly not this human being's strong point

The MC is just an annoying guy, he keeps saying he's paranoid and everything but he gets the slightest bit of power and is lost. The writing, despite not having many spelling errors, is by no means succinct, something that the author could explain in two sentences takes almost the entire chapter, making it full of endless monologues, as if he were explaining it to a 5-year-old child. what he's been doing for years, in other words, it was easier to just continue the story. I'm not even going to delve into this disgusting being called MC, annoying and irritating hypocrite.

disgusting creature this MC

Of course, of course, instead of telling his own brother not to humiliate himself for attention and be with a nice girl, he prefers to tell someone that he has no blood ties, how can you not hate that stupid thought?

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thanks author, i love it when edward humiliates his enemies without even that being the priority

I think it would be something like shouting very excited

I need Edward going to a marvel universe and saying the same thing to Professor X