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I am starting to correct, fix and iron out one or two errors. There won't be any changes in the story or anything like that, they are just improvements to make it more passable. I'll fix about six chapters a day, I started yesterday, so I'm on chapter twelve.

Thanks for the review and I would like to contradict you, but obviously the first volume is just as you described. The ideas were there, but I didn't know how to manage them and about the grammar I don't deny it, my main language is not English making sentences or expressions confusing going through the translator. Still, thanks for the review!

Thanks for the constructive criticism and rest assured I will keep it in mind for future chapters.