Apathy_Personified
Lv4
I'm one 'political idiocy' away from selling my soul just to see the world burn.....I'm tired of y'all
2023-01-04 入りましたNigeria
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2.8kh
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3289
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バッジ
7瞬間
1909
Apathy_Personified6hコメントCh 2 Creative Mode- Apathy_Personified16hコメントCh 2 Chapter 2: A World Enshrouded in Darkness Beset By A Broken Moon
- Apathy_Personified17hコメントCh 15 Chapter 15 - Jobol's Plan
- Apathy_Personified1dコメントCh 14 Bankai
- Apathy_Personified1dコメントCh 29 28 - Lumen Draconis
- Apathy_Personified1dコメントCh 2 That Was Then, this is Now
- Apathy_Personified1dコメントCh 14 Chapter 14 - Dying Mind of the Mad and Insane May 28
- Apathy_Personified2dコメントCh 32 32. Humanity
- Apathy_Personified2dコメントCh 10 10: Rewarding
- Apathy_Personified4dコメントCh 109 Chapter 109 Going To Apokolips
- Apathy_Personified4dコメントCh 22 21 - Karma and Swords
- Apathy_Personified4dコメント
This chapter is better than the previous one but there're still errors such as; (1) A big wall of text; (2) Wrong paragraphing; (3) Lack of quotation marks in conversation parts; (4) Lack of indicator of change of perspective at some point; and some I may not be able to identify (Not an English native).
Ch 2 chapter 02 : waking up to reality and past stories - Apathy_Personified4dに返信 lim_47Ch 1 chapter 01: the beginning
- Apathy_Personified4dコメントCh 1 chapter 01: the beginning
- Apathy_Personified5dコメントCh 74 74 - New power
- Apathy_Personified5dに返信 Joseph_Benton_8359Ch 9 Chapter 9 - Reactions Part 2: Asari & Salarians
- Apathy_Personified5dに返信 Joseph_Benton_8359Ch 9 Chapter 9 - Reactions Part 2: Asari & Salarians
- Apathy_Personified6dコメントCh 9 Chapter 9: Maefa!! And down you go~~