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UltimateAuthor199913dに返信 Yasser_El_Habroukyes but he can't advertise that to people, since he has shown rapid advancement he has to play the part of a genius to cover the existence of the system. that is not being an idiot, it is being safe
Qi Ming looked at Tang Bing in confusion and said, "Isn't it very normal to reach the Perfection realm just by practicing?"- UltimateAuthor199918dコメント
He became Professor Quirell in an instant
Before he could finish his words, he saw a fluster flashing across the Zhang laoshi, who was calm and formidable a moment ago in the classroom. Indignantly, he said, “Cao laoshi, you are spouting nonsense… Liu Yang is… willing to become my student! I… I… had never coerced him!” - UltimateAuthor19991mthに返信 SkyEmperor101
He is a superhuman but his quirk is not related to speed. He is able to achieve amazing fears even with the limitations of his quirk. Plus he hasn't used Soru yet which is his most likely fastest speed. It's like asking why captain America can't run like The Flash if he is a superhuman too. It's illogical
After leaving the ice field, he stepped on the firm ground and decided to test a hypothesis he made during the week he spent training with his now friend, Kirishima. His normal sprinting speed was something on the base of 49km/h he could maintain that speed for 2 hours if he controlled his liver to metabolize his fats, transforming them in glycogen, the fuel needed for his muscles to maintain his top speed for this extended period of time. - UltimateAuthor19991mthに返信 Tyler_Henline_7485
he is 16 but he has the mind of a reincarnated 50 year old, it is better that he gets with Miruko than any of the other students
( An: this is an extra chapter, I was reading the comments and saw a person that was exited to see the reaction of his classmates. I read that comment and could not stop to ruminate this on my mind for hours. So I wrote a draft on a paper notebook and found it good enough to be posted. I tried a new style of writing, just working my writer muscles a bit trying to practice something new. You folks be the critics, what do you think? Now that I finally got this idea out of my head I can sleep at least.) - UltimateAuthor19992mthコメント
I'm sorry but didn't MC tell Slytherin that he has no descendants left other than Voldemort in a previous chapter or am I wrong? Was he lying to Slytherin as that is the only way this makes sense? But why lie to someone you are going to kill anyway?
That reminded Nick for whatever reason of the magical family that existed over in the united states that was the descendants of Slytherin , the Sayre. It was rather funny in a way that the only remaining members of Slytherins bloodline in the world had entirely abandoned the mans institution and country. In fact unlike the Gaunts the Sayre were very noble as they truly sought the betterment of wizards both muggleborn and pureblood alike.- - UltimateAuthor19993mthコメント
why not? why have a wand with nothing to hold it? It's like a gun with no holster.
It was better to keep them hidden. A wand holster was not something a student would normally carry. He would only put on the other one when going outside. - UltimateAuthor19993mthに返信 Filiusel
for real tho 😂
The woman did look alright, but she had a strong aura surrounding her, keeping everything within five meters at bay. Even a fly that wandered into the exclusion zone would be killed. - UltimateAuthor19993mthに返信 Decafz
not really , at the beginning of the story it was explained that because of the system he would have no bottlenecks in his cultivation
In half a year, he broke through to Foundation Building Level Four, while Little Jiang Xue reached Qi Nurturing Level Eight. They worked hard day and night, together with the support of spirits stones, and their progress was quite quick. - UltimateAuthor19993mthに返信 Patience
never mind sorry I own up to my mistakes , I got the order of cultivation wrong.
Zhou Xuanji reached the tenth level of Qi Nurturing, while Little Jiang Xue reached the fourth level of Qi Nurturing. - UltimateAuthor19993mthに返信
actually no, his second brother started cultivating at six and did not reach the pellet stage until 20 then he reached the foundation stage a couple years later. I believe a previous chapter stated this already but I could be wrong.
Zhou Xuanji reached the tenth level of Qi Nurturing, while Little Jiang Xue reached the fourth level of Qi Nurturing. - UltimateAuthor19996mthに返信 Holy_Passerby
He also has the memory and experiences inherited from the previous owner of the body. That could have changed his personality and how he deals with things.
この段落は削除されました。 - UltimateAuthor19991yrに返信 DaoistojZfIq
I am going to keep that in mind going forward but for now I am going to chalk this up to it being an alternate universe of bnha.
A perfect example of this would be the soon to be graduate of UA they have been talking about who has a quirk that allows her to become a giant essentially, but she can only go from giant form to normal form. - UltimateAuthor19991yrに返信 ferferfer2
I don't know but then again All Might usually punches everyone with enough force to pop anyone's head off but you don't see it happening. Besides Izuku has held back on his strength before like in the USJ when he used his power for the first time without breaking his arm. He subconsciously held back because it was the first time he had used it on a human.
Kicking off the wall as hard as he could, Izuku landed a haymaker on the man's face. Landing on the opposite wall, he launched himself again at the dazed man, landing a knee on his ribcage. Now that he was on his last legs the teen finished him off with an uppercut to the chin, knocking him out. After making sure the man was knocked out, Izuku immediately went to make sure the woman was okay. - UltimateAuthor19991yrに返信 jahmii
Thanks for that he has always been smart so he wouldn't bring attention to himself as much as using his newfound abilities, but he's not one to show off his intelligence so no one really knows about it anyways aside from Katsuki who's known him for most of his life. If it bothers you that much though I can change it.
この段落は削除されました。 - UltimateAuthor19991yrコメント
Thank you for the great support you have shown me throughout the story so far. I have recently been dealing with the aftermath of a hurricane so I'm sorry I hadn't uploaded for a bit. Please give me your feedback as I'm always looking for chances to improve!
Ch 5 Chapter 5 Closure - UltimateAuthor19991yrに返信 Pedro_Padre
I know what you mean, but he actually shapes out into a decent and respectable character later in the series, even if he's a little rough around the edges. But yeah he could easily have been a villain.
"Here's a little word of advice, don't even think of applying to UA," Bakugo started walking out the door but stopped and turned to face Izuku at the doorway, a smirk on his. "If you really want to be a hero though, there is a way. Take a jump off this roof and pray that you're born with a quirk in your next life," everyone's eyes widened at what just came out of his mouth. - UltimateAuthor19991yrに返信 Kwetzal_Lag
Thanks for that, it gave me the laugh I needed.
Laying there with his flesh shredded from his face, Liam was in pure agony. He couldn't move, couldn't even scream with the blood gurgling out of his mouth. There was a crowd gathering, most taking pictures and watching while the rest were trying to call emergency services. - UltimateAuthor19991yrコメント
Now it should be obvious by now, but the MC has no idea what RWBY is and I think it is better that way. When a character is aware that he is in a TV show, to me it feels like they are manipulating the emotions of the characters to get the results they want. Besides, it would be pretty boring if they knew everything from the start. I am sorry the chapters are so short, but I end these chapters at points I feel would be good to stop at and more chapters are to come this weekend! Please feel free to tell me how you feel and if I could improve anywhere as I am always looking to better myself at writing and thanks for staying awesome!
Ch 7 Chapter 7 A Plan is Hatched - UltimateAuthor19991yrに返信 UltimateAuthor1999Ch 4 Chapter 4 The Warmth of Kindness