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CryingSilence

CryingSilence

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An aspiring writer fervently writing. Discord Link: https://discord.gg/8ePQESSSHT

2022-08-06 入りましたAntarctica
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  • CryingSilence
    CryingSilence1yr
    発表

    First, is writing quality, which, although there are a few grammar errors here and there, mostly extra commas or no commas where a comma is needed, the writing quality is a lot better than most books on the platform, so a solid 4. Second is the stability of updates, which, although is pretty good at the moment, it's too early to tell, so another 4. Third is the story development, which is pretty good, as the beginning is fast paced, as it needs to be, with only like two chaps of info dump, which is pretty good. Fourth is character design, which is pretty generic honestly. I mean, sure, MC is cultivator -> regular dude -> sci-fi mage, with a wanting for power, but like, I've seen the first two steps before, and the third step has been explored in a few novels, so it's not like there's anything that ground-breakingly new, neither are the characters super realistic or get you super emotional, so another 4. Finally, there's the world background, which is the best aspect of this novel, as it's a pretty novel sci-fi world, and, seeing as there aren't that many sci-fi novels on this platform, I've already seen some pretty unique things, and the world building overall is amazing. First and only 5. That's all, a pretty good read overall, and one that I would probably just wait until it stockpiled a bunch just to read it all in one go. Keep it up, author!

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  • CryingSilence
    CryingSilence1yr
    に返信 Justa_NormalGuy

    No, there was a three year timeskip.

    Such a familiar person, I could never forget her after all this time, as my heart ached. And there, still on her neck, was the necklace that I had given her all those years ago.
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  • CryingSilence
    CryingSilence1yr
    に返信 CHVA2001

    Thank you so much for the kind review!

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    CryingSilence1yr
    に返信 Purple_g00s3

    It definitely isn't

    There he was, blood pouring out of his slashed eyes, as he hung there in the middle of the room, slighting swinging like a pendulum whilst turning so that I could see his whole body, his cut up bedsheets tied around his neck and hanging him from the ceiling.
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    CryingSilence1yr
    に返信 Unmasked63

    Thank you for the kind review!

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  • CryingSilence
    CryingSilence1yr
    に返信 Samir_Khan_1723

    Well, I've been writing by myself for the past two months, so yeah, don't think I'll be dropping anything anytime toon :)

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  • CryingSilence
    CryingSilence1yr
    に返信 Chibi_Zuobai

    Also, just realized you were on day 24, so...

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  • CryingSilence
    CryingSilence1yr
    に返信 Samir_Khan_1723

    Oh, I said this before, but my sister quit I while back, it's only me now, sadly...

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  • CryingSilence
    CryingSilence1yr
    に返信 Chibi_Zuobai

    Uhm...

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  • CryingSilence
    CryingSilence1yr
    発表

    This is the author's shameless review! If you guys find any mistakes, just comment on them and I'll fix it in a day. Thanks for reading! Also, if you guys have any questions, just reply to this post and I'll answer them as early as possible, I just won't reveal any spoilers.

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  • CryingSilence
    CryingSilence1yr
    に返信 Chibi_Zuobai

    I mean, gimme some leeway man. I usually don't end my chaps on a cliffhanger, only like, 25% of them end in a cliffhanger, which is abysmally low compared to a lot of other authors, because I hate it when authors do it to me too, so, I think you can have the patience for a cliffhanger or two every once in a while, or have I spoiled you too much?... (Also, there will be a extra chap when a reach 10k cols -_-)

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  • CryingSilence
    CryingSilence1yr
    に返信 Samir_Khan_1723

    Thank you so much for the kind and detailed review (the only other one of these that I've ever gotten was pinned, so this one will be too). Thank you so much!

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  • CryingSilence
    CryingSilence1yr
    に返信 MimicReads

    Also, thanks for the kind review!

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  • CryingSilence
    CryingSilence1yr
    に返信 MimicReads

    Welp, it's set in Korea, what do you think?

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    CryingSilence1yr
    に返信 Flick_Gamer

    Thank you for the kind review! (I have no idea why I never saw this until now.)

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  • CryingSilence
    CryingSilence1yr
    に返信 Donutsaurio

    Whee!

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    CryingSilence1yr
    に返信 Stormeyy

    Just cause I'm trying to make it an AU

    A/N: This is an AU, so I'll be refraining from using the names of actual countries and I might create my own names, just a fair warning.
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    CryingSilence1yr
    に返信 Percent_Grader

    Nice

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    CryingSilence1yr
    に返信

    And thanks for getting this far.

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    CryingSilence1yr
    に返信

    Cya man!

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