YAMRAAJ_021
As a overthinker, I wanted to write my imagination into story that I could share with you guys and hope to gain support from readers😉
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YAMRAAJ_0219mthに返信 BloodEvolver_1Transmigration into shinobi world's chances are even more lower...
"I finally did it," Miles said with a mix of joy and sadness as tears streamed down his face. "I finally achieved your dream." He had always promised his best friend Mia that he would climb this mountain one day, and now here he was, standing at the top of the world, looking down at the beautiful landscape below. The stars twinkled in the sky, reminding Miles of all the nights he and Mia had spent stargazing. But as he gazed up at the sky, he noticed one star that seemed to be getting larger and larger. Suddenly, Miles realized that it wasn't a star at all, but a meteor hurtling towards him.- YAMRAAJ_0219mthに返信 AllenCross
- YAMRAAJ_02110mthに返信 Super_Vegito_3273Ch 9 Face Changing Sasuke
- YAMRAAJ_02110mthに返信 Anitimesc
would it be okay? if I deviate the story and make a new world out of it and stronger power levels which are more powerful than hokage level strength.
so tell me if you want me to continue this fanfic or change things or just drop it.] - YAMRAAJ_02110mthに返信 unova09Ch 10 Chapter-10
- YAMRAAJ_02110mthに返信 Daoist92VPav
so do you want to me to add other villages and introduce magic in it ?
so tell me if you want me to continue this fanfic or change things or just drop it.] - YAMRAAJ_02110mthに返信 BABU_DADACh 9 Face Changing Sasuke
- YAMRAAJ_02111mthに返信 Captain_jerryCh 135 skip
- YAMRAAJ_02111mth発表
I have to say the concept is unique and new. Grammar is pretty good. Pace is also good nor too fast and nor too slow. Interaction between character is pretty well done. Love the concept and hope the author not get divert and ruin the book in later plot. If anyone wants to read a book, I would say to definitely give a chance to this book...
- YAMRAAJ_02111mthに返信 roll_the_musicCh 1 Who did i offend
- YAMRAAJ_02111mthに返信 roll_the_musicCh 1 Who did i offend
- YAMRAAJ_02111mth発表
Hello reader's Im not shameless enough to claim that this book is good enough to be a top tier because this is the first time I started writing and English is not my native language. In starting I didn't understand the switching problem of POV and made the starting chapter a bit hard to read but slowly I gained some knowledge about writing and also taking advice from fellow authors. Anyways here are some things regarding the story:-• MC in starting is quite dumb and not ruthless but he will slowly become ruthless. *Spoiler* His personality will starting to change after he get to know why and by whom he was sent to this world.• For romance I'm taking it slow and doesn't want to get a brain dead Female Lead and so I'm slowly doing character development. Also I want to ask would you guys need me to write R18(Smut) scenes?•Alsp want to ask should MC have a huge harem or something like 3 Wife and 4 concubines.•I don't earn much from this book and I'm writing it to hone my skills for second and third novel which I'm preparing to write.•There will be some duplicate and repeated chapters so please skip them(Im genuinely sorry for that but I couldn't do anything about it.)|•| Alright guys if you have any questions regarding the story or anything you can ask me!
- YAMRAAJ_02111mthに返信 immortal_waterCh 38 You are a Great Actor
- YAMRAAJ_02111mthに返信 jasmine_walkinsCh 127 Editing.....
- YAMRAAJ_02111mthに返信 HaremNovelfan
Thanks for correction....
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