I love reading as you can tell cuz Iâm on this app ð Btw read âMors Aranea Academyâ itâs my new book. Thx!
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Are there more chapters in the privileges? I can't wait for the next update! Please update!
I hate Ryuu for some reason..I feel likee he isn't goodd for Haru and he hasn't changed. He may become abusive In the future...
This story is well developed and written well. It has a good story concept and character build. The MC definitely has a realistic personality that most books donât have. I love the ethnicity that you show with her being Spanish. You donât see that in many books, itâs definitely a fresh outlook on a character. The world building is great, itâs the real world so of course. There are a few grammer mistakes but overall this book is great! I hope you get somewhere in writing and keep updating! I canât wait for the next update!
The storyline seems good, as does the plot. The world building is unique but I have seen this concept a few times. There has been slight development in the story which is good. Character design is great, the basic character personality is displayed. Overall this story is good. Though the first chapter is bland and the grammar and punctuation need fixing. Also maybe try giving your character a realistic personality rather than a happy or determined one, that has been seen in protagonists a lot. Good book though.
Good chapter
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This book is good. It has a good plot yet lacks many things. There needs to be less author notes in the middle of the story, it is rather annoying. Maybe also fix some grammatical mistakes. Iâd advice grammerly. Try adding more of the setting so we can imagine where it is taking place. The character design is interesting keep it up. Overall itâs good, just needs polishing.
Thank you! Bestow friendooo Yuji-kun!
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