Shadowwarrior_007
in a world of words
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I like the premise, concept of the story, and if I may be of help, I'll advise adding a bit of sensory , as for the story I like the idea, and how the author has done so far, it's still to early to judge, but I'll give a detailed review when there's more chapters . for now , Author should write more
you came here to watch a magic show didn't you?
This shii feels like saying a speech in front of a high school class.
So the system means, don't tell her you such and such ,just so she can brag ,and you get it.
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