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Karito_4 months agoに返信 DonaghaI couldnt continue the current plot. So Im scrapping it and using a different character.
- Karito_4 months ago発表
Yello. I'm Karito. Check out my novel. Give feedback. I usually post Sundays since its the only day I actually have time to write. So relax and enjoy the chapters once a week.
- Karito_4 months agoコメント
You know what would be interesting to see. If in a scenario where Rosaline is hurt, and Jasper is around, you can make Jasper go pale. Everyone around would ask whats wrong, and Jasper would say, that normally, he would barely feel any emotions from Gabriel, but now all he feels is rage. Like an amount he's never ever seen before. You can play around with this idea if you wish. Great story up till now
- Karito_6 months agoに返信 Dhaliwal2
Why though? Whats the point of de-ageing for an hour?
- Karito_10 months agoに返信 Quin_Bland
Give me some slack guys, I'm an idiot.
- Karito_a year agoコメント
Brother give it another shot. Dont worry about the break. I dont know about you but I got kind of lazy and couldn't find the inspiration to continue.
- Karito_a year agoコメント
wait did he kiss her on her cheek or hair?
- Karito_a year agoに返信 The_reader_ofnovel
He's trying to keep Toph far away from Zuko. The offence its self isn't that wrong. Just an overprotective father.
- Karito_a year ago発表
Hey guys, shameless author here to give himself a good review. This a different version of ATLA as my previous one ended as a failure. Hope you enjoy...
