So far, everything is going great. I like where the story is going and I actually feel immersed while I'm reading it. Also the writing quality is absolutely amazing for your first time writing a story, so keep up the great work 👍.
Amid a city with stone floors, a young man appeared without anyone noticing at all. He was a short dark-skinned young man with light blue hair, wearing a black long-sleeved compression shirt, and white baggy pants with brown sandals.