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What a masterpiece, from the writing and the narrative to the plot and characters. Everything is perfect 👏 The plot heavily relies on 'Emotions', from Mc's character and his development to his powers. It's one thing to write about emotions like anger, sadness, fear... but to make the readers feel what the Mc is feeling is another thing, whenever he spins that wheel, i get really nervous 😅 I love the world building and this world's history that's slowly being unravel arc after arc. Right now, there are so many unanswered questions, and that's what makes it even more interesting. a unique, new, and easy to understand power system. Another positive point is that it's a 'multiple POV' novel, so the characters are all fleshed out and have their personalities, I still don't know who the female lead's gonna be , fortunately I love them all (of course Delilah have a special place In my heart 😁) Did I mention how amazing the writing is? the narrative, how the author changes the POVs so we can see the events in other characters' eyes and thoughts, the dialogs and monologs, their inner thoughts, and ... (I really loved that 'Theater arc' ) Finally, I love Julien as a protagonist, If you feel like you don't like him, read the first 20-30 chapters. That's when some important character development's happening. Don't hesitate to do yourselves a favor and read this masterpiece 😊 have a nice read 📖
I just love Elyon's works I've read all of his novel, even RWYSS was one of my first novels.I loved the character development of Ethan. Each arc is an adventure, and each one of them are dots that at some point connect together to form a bigger picture, and that's why I love this so much.also, the author did a great job in romance here, and I believe he handled the harem part very well. There's no rush in relationships, and I love every one of the FLs.so many people compare it to Harry Potter. Yes, the setting is similar, and some parts are inspired by Harry Potter, but believe me, when u say this, it's totally different. The plot, character , power system, world building.... everything is different, and some concepts like flying brooms or magic wands, a magical skeleton (instead of hat) to determine what dormitory they belong.... just these small things.
Hi everyone !! I have to say it's far from a 5 star story but let me have this one hehehe. I'm writing this in my free times and I'm super busy in real life matters to the point that sometimes I have no time to even read a chapter in the whole day 🥹. anyway ask me anything you want about the story and I'll answer you 👋❤️
I definitely love this development. recently, every myth related novel I've read was about every Goddesses falling in love with Mc, who is a Mortal . now this is a different approach ( mother and son ) . I have some knowledge about mythology but author, if you can make some chapters about related God and Goddesses like nyx and why does she hate humans ❤️👋
HAHAHA Thanks God I clicked on this novel out of boredom 🙏 , I was just scrolling to find something to read then I found then gem . charecters are awesome , author really did a great job at making them reall .if you like mythology like me you're going to love it and if you have a little knowledge about them ( or a little search ) that would be much more pleasurable. I love mc's personality bc he's not edgy or blind by some useless revenge . although author said its gonna be a slow paced at first I think it's really good and those slice of life chapters at the beginning shaped those charecters' personality and I can see mc's development in the long run . my only fear is if dear author wants to expand the harem to a high number ( 4 to 6 members are good imo but I'm gonna read it anyway) one thing author there are alot of Horny readers on this app/site including me , just don't listen to us you're doing a great job 🫡 thanks for your hard work ❤️👋
I'm really happy to find such a gem and at the same time I'm quite sad I found it this early ( there are not enough chapters 😢) but I love this , I've read your previous works author and this new novel of yours shows how much experience you gained after writing those novels .also I love Elara and I can already imagine her becoming a Gangster
whitesnow you are already one of my favorite authors I'm coming from your other book , I caught up with latest chapters and came here to read another great work from you please just don't drop any of these two books you know how to write a good plot with an awesome harem ( with actual romance + Charecter development + no forced love ) and it's really refreshing the only problem is the lack of chapters but that's not your fault , your not a machine so please continue your excellent work and good luck ☺
author will mc's harem members interact with each other in future ( like living together or something like this ) actually I'm at work so I don't have much time but just 40 chapters and my mind is already distracted you know asking myself what would happen to ... what if ... or something like this please answer this last question thank you in advance and sorry for the trouble