big kudos for the suggestion, i didn't even know the word netori existed, Please help me by pointing out any mistakes I might have missed. Also if you have any specific sections or ideas you'd like feedback on, feel free to share them!
" A dog who did not recognize his own master can never be a loyal dog" Gastov looked down putting immense pressure on them that they can hardly breathe
'Well, I hope I made the right decision, growing up I never once had this feeling of family, when my parents died I didn't feel a thing but those sisters even when they were about to die they could still ask to spare their sisters, that just amaze me,'