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This is my personal review of my story. The writing quality to ok at best. I am new to this so I expected it to be this bad. There aren't many typos but the wiring structure is terrible. The story development so far is bad, but that is to be expected because it is the early arcs of Tensura. It will 100% at least get a bit better in later arcs when I go into the wn. Character design is basically the same as Tensura, just Munuru is added. Munuru is unnecessarily op, much more than the op of Tensura. Updating stability is bad, I take very long breaks when I do and at this moment if chapter 19 I am sick so It will be varied. World background right now is bad, but in future chapters it will be revealed why I put it at 4 stars. You can decide to read this if you want but don't expect much. I will be doing a remake of this, just without the unnecessary opness. There will also be sequels with better overall reviews.
That's what I am going to do! Thanks for the review and I totally agree. I personally like op MCs especially since it fits with tensura but I went quite overboard. I think I have stated before that I am going to rewrite the story without [Gods will]. You can leave if you want or wait until the remake when I will 1. be a better writer 2. characters will have more expression 3. The MC will fit the scaling of Tensura.
Sorry no, but there are going to be many sequels. After this book is finished I will start another one but I will make 50 chapters before posting the first chap so I can keep it consistent. There are going to be sequels but the mc's aren't going to be Munuru, like I said in the synopsis there are going to be multiple different worlds. My idea is that I am going to create a sort of omniverse and outerverse, but I'm going to stop here, I don't want to spoil the whole thing.
I meant it haha
Really? It should be correct since to get -ab you need to multiply a and b. Since -a and -b are added then they should be separated along with -ab and a^2
Emi did a scan of all of the students and told Munuru. Also because of Investigator Munuru can see all past events no matter what. Emi scanned for events about Chloe and found Chronoa.
Maybe a chap in an hour
Hahahaha, soon it will be plain but don't expect it to be too soon