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Deleted 01110

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I Regressed 1 Hour Before Reincarnating Into My Novel

13 years after I reincarnated into my novel [The Last Hero] and possessed *The Final Boss, Kalaraja Anantim*, I met my end... Is this how I meet my end? is this the result of everything that I did? I grit my teeth in anger, sadness and disgust at myself... not for dying or failing to rule and control over all... but because I failed to meet that Bastard who sent me to this novel that has a damned main character with a S rank level plot armour. If only I didn't meet my end here!!!. I swear that if I somehow survive, I will accomplish my goal to conquer all and become a supreme being and then take revenge against those other damned fellow reincarnated people that dared do this to me. It was then that I saw that light from 13 years ago come to me again. This....... Hahahahahahahahaha, I have regressed back to 13 years ago. I shall use my remaining 1 hour on earth to fix the novel to my advantage, hahahahaha!!. Authors Note: Hai everyone !!! :) this is my first novel that I decided to create after getting bored of other novel reincarnation novels. I hope that you can give me some reviews and also comment on what's good and bad for future references. Thanks Also, The MC will be a bit strong at the beginning so If you hate those novels where Mc is strong at the beginning then sorry because this Novel wont be your type. This cover does not belong to me, if it's yours, just tell me and I will remove it.

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EnjoyedAuthorEnjoyed

I forgot to give my shameless 5 star review haha. Anyway, this is the first fanfic I'm going to finish so you can consider it my first story with really minor experience. Expect it to get better as time goes on and don't hesitate to point out any mistakes

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This is my personal review of my story. The writing quality to ok at best. I am new to this so I expected it to be this bad. There aren't many typos but the wiring structure is terrible. The story development so far is bad, but that is to be expected because it is the early arcs of Tensura. It will 100% at least get a bit better in later arcs when I go into the wn. Character design is basically the same as Tensura, just Munuru is added. Munuru is unnecessarily op, much more than the op of Tensura. Updating stability is bad, I take very long breaks when I do and at this moment if chapter 19 I am sick so It will be varied. World background right now is bad, but in future chapters it will be revealed why I put it at 4 stars. You can decide to read this if you want but don't expect much. I will be doing a remake of this, just without the unnecessary opness. There will also be sequels with better overall reviews.

WarTheHorseman
WarTheHorsemanLv4WarTheHorseman

"I am Munuru, the blade of Rimuru, and I have never known defeat." Haven't read yet but already, the concept sounds amazing.................

HankTheFisherMan
HankTheFisherManLv4HankTheFisherMan

Its just boring.. i stopped halfway through chapter 8, because its just exactly the same as the original. The mc doesn’t add anything to the story at all to the point where you can remove the mc from the story and almost nothing changes. Everything rimuru did in the original he still does in this fanfic so its not like the mc took his place. She is litteraly there for decoration. At an early stage she is ridiculously op, but i don’t have a problem with that. The thing i do have a problem with is the fact that even though she has so much power she just follows the exact same plot. I dont know if this changes later, but this is what i think of the story in the first 8 chapters.

gg_gg_0642
gg_gg_0642Lv4gg_gg_0642

why delete chapter's. .. .. . .. . hhjbnn

TRUE_R_O_B
TRUE_R_O_BLv4TRUE_R_O_B

I like it keep it up and will be waiting for any new fanfic you make

Robert_Thompson97
Robert_Thompson97Lv15Robert_Thompson97

I really liked the story and it was going in the right direction but the MC got way too OP. Their existance value was just ridiculous! I dropped because at that point whats the point of the story but I wish you rewrite it! I dont mind and OP MC but it still has to be reasonable to work. She should not be able to beat Milim at all and only when shes nearing full potential shd she be able too

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