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dustin_fitzgerald

Lv14
2022-04-04 入りましたUnited States
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  • dustin_fitzgeralda month ago
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    at some point plan to try again tho will be trying to skip all the mother perv and smutt hoping there is a decent story behind it

  • dustin_fitzgeralda month ago
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    content*

  • dustin_fitzgeralda month ago
    に返信 o_Infinite_o

    you skipped over everything i said I said it's to soon to be throwing smut in the story and to far in order to make the story more interesting instead of trying to throw in horny brain useless story could have held off and gave contest to the world or mc personality but instead they threw in some random smut of an overly horny mother sexualizing her son while he is still a toddler Evan if she somehow knows he is reincarnated or anything could she not simply wait till he is older and chooses for himself what to do the age of 7 is way to young at least let them be a teen before Evan thinking of throwing smut in if this was a father to a daughter everyone would be losing there mind at how bad it is

  • dustin_fitzgeralda month ago
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    with gust the free chapters out of the 40 only 5 of them really had relevant info so much filler and mostly just repeated chapters of how his sister is a creep and mc is a beta who gets let by the nose by her

  • dustin_fitzgerald3 months ago
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    I couldn't Evan give the book a chance you have a 7 year old boy sexually playing with his mother and this is less than 10 chapters in not only is it to far but also to soon to be putting smut iI when we haven't learned shit about the mc and he is only 7 years old it's just weird and makes the story trashy

  • dustin_fitzgeralda year ago
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    this writing is horrible there is little to no information or background of the world and events/chapters will suddenly be cut off and feel like a whole chapters was skipped

  • dustin_fitzgeralda year ago
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    honestly I don't Evan know where to start I couldn't continue passed chapter 40 before i drop this the main character is litterly handed everything yet follows his dick instead of his brain he can litterly power up at any time but he is so lazy that instead of increasing his power he flirts with his family almost all of the 40 chapters i read are the mc flirting and thinking with his dick he Evan knowingly starts a fight with powerful people yet is to lazy to power up and just waits for it to be gifted or takes 4 hours to suddenly power up just enough to be lazy again

  • dustin_fitzgerald2 years ago
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    love the concept and so far the story is intreresting

  • dustin_fitzgerald2 years ago
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    has ntr and not free use already talks about paying resources for other that are not family

  • dustin_fitzgerald2 years ago
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    stopped at chaper 41 was ok till you upgraded the system the lust system seems more like a liability then an actual blessing dude had 12 million points and the list system stole all of it to add to that the upgrade dident help you it hurt you it demands you do things or it will cripple you (such as takeing your dick of changing your gender to female) and it took away your easy points that were not much but still worth 1bronze coin each and honestly the messed up part is you could have had a better system ( tho you could argue that they would become trash later to) at this point I'd sell the lust system to the store and focus on the store not the lust system maybe Evan try to buy a system that helps gather coins for you store system