I also agree with you about ron but you have to remember that Hermione in real series . Left her parents , friends and even Ron or we can say left everything just to help her friend Harry . We want to read an Harry Potter fanfiction not something like he is fucker , he is fucker, she is fucker , all of them are fucker , I am superior all of them are fucker. Bro I want to read a fanfiction in which Harry is not weak but all fanfictions are either about system or they are using powers of different worlds , in some Harry is spoting nonsense and calling everyone fucker , bro Harry Potter world have some awesome and overpowered spells that Harry can learn to became overpowered. Like findfire , portego dibolika, weather manuplation like Grindelwald , almost overnight transfugration like Dumbledore, spells like aparate , water manuplation spells , that fire storm spell Dumbledore used in cave , and many more but no all they want is use guns , or make rasangun , or became tonystark , or some system fuck , or play Pokemon with girls ,

Don't read this is Chinese cultivation shit . Nothing makes sense.,............................................................................................. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

Pathetic

Tell me one reason to read your story . I understand slow pace stories but for the fucks sake it almost 600 chapters he didn't even had his first gym battle. You know how frustrated I am . I want to kill you in faking 600 most brutal ways .

Bro thor was not able to defeat hela in thor regnarok was because he had just awakened his powers . That's the reason he needed regnarok to happen. But you can give this thor his power early , he can train to be equal to or more powerful then hella . Mcu didn't use Thor's full potential. They just nerfed him by giving strombraker . Man he is god of thunder and Strom . He can cantrol thunder . You can make hi god not some superhero. Like when he was fighting with hella and her army in regnarok. He fought wih his hands why not just make thunder strikes fall on whole of undead army until they parish why just one thunder strike . He can manipulate thunder and turn it into countless thunder Spears to counter Hellas spikes . He can assimilate thunder in his body and can travel at the speed of light , he can cantrol electro megnetic filed with his ability to control thunder . And can lift anything and even can fly without need of hammer ⚒️ . As god of thunder and storm he can control Air and water also . He can stimulate his body and cells with lightning and get stronger and have regeneration speed equal to that of hella . And just many more

No offence but story is copy of the reincarnated assassin is genius swordsman. With some changes like mc is mage in past rather then assassin , in orignal story mc have golden hair , reborn in family of Glenn zieghardt the northan king of annilation . With change is hi is MCs meternal grandfather in orginal story , same he have condictions his mother was best but due to Mone reasons her cor is dammaged and got demoted . Man this even got manga adaption

marital arts is must

it's my first time writing conversations , I mean it's difficult man that's the reason why i didn't write nothing much about his time with family . cos i don't know how to make it relatable and for it to not look like forced . but thank you will work on it though i will not read much form other novel rather I Was planning to watch the Harry Potter movie every time before writing new chapter

I am working on it sir .

thank you for your suggestion . as a Harry Potter fan I don't want to change the power system of the Harry Potter world to much drastically . what i think is what's point of having to much overpowered mc from start as for magic talent of merlin ( i started writing this fan fic because i have read almost every Harry Potter fan fic currently on web novel . and concepts of Merlin is alredy in use . what I want is something new , just think about it our mc fighting with his enemy using spells already existing in Harry Potter and fantastic beast movies like , findfire a spell which can destroy huckrux, portego dibolika that Grindelwald used in crimes of Grindelwald that huge blue fire man why is there need to give mc some op outside of hp power when he can become op with such spells . I want to make original hp novel more relatable . I mean what i dont like about original is why all people in final movie only used basic spells in which just a light came out of there wand's in combate , when Voldemort cloud have just destroyed whole Hogwarts with some op spell like findfire in a single go and there would have been no Dumbledore to stop him like in ministry

Pathetic don't read it remember don't read it . And if you read just to let you know story and at ch 100 . Cos mutch further then ch 100 is darkest and most smelly shit an person can write. I hink author is not human cos a human can not write that bad 🤬🤬🤬🤬

I will try my best and improve in future please support and give your reviews about it in comments . New chapters will release everyday till 20 chapters

why are you streching the story so long . mean it's almost 10 chapter since we are waiting for rose and mc . but you are streching it for long and long

Everything is fine even spear or bow , sword , or make him magician but no gun

Please no gun please 🙏🙏

Please no gun what's point of having magic when you are going to use gun

Why he is not using magic

Plese just get rid of that gun and give him a wapen what's point of reading a sword and magic fictional story whan mc is going to use a gun can't i just go and watch tarminator or something like that