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Ok, this is disappointing to read. If you were going to completely change Harry's roots and his family history, you should have just created a different character who was fresh. The Potter family can be traced back to Linfred of Stinchcombe, a 12th-century wizard who was a celebrated potion-maker and the original source of the family’s wealth. He was affectionately known as "the Potterer," which eventually became "Potter." I'm up to chapter 22, and it feels disappointing. I hate that Harry Potter fanfics always try to force their MC to go to school for absolutely no reason.
Okay, I could not keep reading this. The MC relies on the system too much and is disgustingly perverted. His behavior is off-putting and detracts from the story. The excessive dependence on the system makes the plot predictable and uninteresting. Overall, it lacks depth and character development, making it hard to stay engaged.
This is stupid. The hero Spider-Man, who made a fool of all the Avengers, can get beaten by a man with the power to turn off a quirk? Let's not forget, Spider-Man does not have a quirk; it was the spider bite that gave him his powers, not a quirk. This is a washed-down Spider-Man; all his powers got weakened.
stolen work from Harry crow by Robst on Fanfiction _________________________________________________________________-----------------------------