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I appreciate the critic. I apologize for the grammar errors, I usually write out chapters when I get home after work around nighttime, and I'm exhausted, so even when I do reread for issues, I miss then.

eventually man. I'm just doing pretty bad man.

it will at some point. I'm just really going through it right now. life's rough and I'm having a tough time making adjustments.

agreed. I definitely agree. I was relatively new to writing when I made this, and I definitely didn't have a very good grasp of what I was doing or of what I wanted.

between work and just sick man. I'm human brother.

it was blue in the anime.

not currently, no.

Yeah, I agree.

not particularly, no.

because at this point it doesn't matter anymore. he's forever trapped under the influence of his zanpakuto.