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MoonBreath

MoonBreath

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uh hello read my novel

2022-03-02 入りましたGlobal
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  • MoonBreath
    MoonBreath1yr
    に返信 Pewkmon

    why are you trying to compare irl to a fantasy novel?

    He even tried becoming a beggar when people were around, but all he got in return was a kick in either his stomach or face.
    Yin & Yang Monarch
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  • MoonBreath
    MoonBreath1yr
    に返信 Pewkmon

    well this is my first time writing a novel, so not everything will make sense sorry, and the novels you see under are just tests

    It was only after an unknown amount of time did they suddenly come to a stop, he quickly looked around him but all he could see was darkness, but he also saw stars that were really bright.
    Yin & Yang Monarch
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  • MoonBreath
    MoonBreath1yr
    に返信 FWEA_JHITT

    ah ur right, i will update it

    この段落は削除されました。
    Yin & Yang Monarch
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  • MoonBreath
    MoonBreath1yr
    コメント

    This might be confusing but i will try to explain it the best i can later in the novel

    The user has power over yin and yang, the natural and spiritual dualities of polar opposites or seemingly contrary forces that are interconnected and interdependent in the natural world and how they give rise to each other in turn in relation to each other. With many distinct natural dualities e.g., dark and light, female and male, low and high, cold and hot, water and fire, earth and air—are thought of as manifestations of yin and yang (respectively).
    Yin & Yang Monarch
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  • MoonBreath
    MoonBreath1yr
    に返信 SpideyNova

    yea I still need a lot of improvements and editing in my writing, and yea I don't plan to make the mc human at all

    Ch 2 Two Beings
    Yin & Yang Monarch
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  • MoonBreath
    MoonBreath2yr
    に返信 Leo_Wood_1125

    Yes I am

    Ch 1 New beginnings
    Cosmic Deity
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  • MoonBreath
    MoonBreath2yr
    に返信 JSKOPOP

    thank you

    Ch 6 New Abilities
    Cosmic Deity
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  • MoonBreath
    MoonBreath2yr
    に返信 Fi3l

    Yea I said that in the second chapter, and don't worry he'll be a ruthless, Psychopathic killer;)

    Ch 2 Explaining
    Cosmic Deity
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  • MoonBreath
    MoonBreath2yr
    コメント

    #596 is the closest reference I could use so you can see her outfit, think of the hoodie more bigger and covers her face so all you see is black.

    ...Eventually I found a perfect outfit and I was surprised at how good it was, it was all black and it has a coat attached to it. The stomach area was a bit revealing but some how I had a feeling she wouldn't really care.
    Life At The End Of Death
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  • MoonBreath
    MoonBreath2yr
    に返信 kuro_mortem

    oh uh sorry I was trying to figure out a way to explain it the best way I can, I'm a new author

    To begin with Arcane power is a mixture of 3 things, Mana, Magic, and Gods Aura these 3 form a perfect harmony and created a whole now energy called "Arcane". The person who found and created this was no other than your mother. But that was trillions of light years ago.
    Life At The End Of Death
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  • MoonBreath
    MoonBreath2yr
    に返信 One_Winged_Angel

    Later on in the chapters I do start using quotations

    Life At The End Of Death
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  • MoonBreath
    MoonBreath2yr
    発表

    I really like the story and the pace of the world building, it also has nice and not too many interactions with characters, also I noticed that the mc isn't dumb like other authors would do with their mc.

    Rebirth of a Nobody
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  • MoonBreath
    MoonBreath2yr
    に返信 Dretno

    woah thanks, you’re the first person to give me a power stone, and I will make sure to write a lot of chapters😲

    Life At The End Of Death
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  • MoonBreath
    MoonBreath2yr
    コメント

    His mouth looks like that now. I forgot which manga that picture was from though. If you don't like me using pictures from different manga's or artist and think i'm plagerizing of some sorts tell me and I will try to be more detailed in explaining things in my novel not so you can get a better picture in your head.

    My mouth felt really weird now but that didn't really matter seeing as how I didn't need to eat anymore but now I had a weird thirst for blood but I could keep it under control."
    Life At The End Of Death
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  • MoonBreath
    MoonBreath2yr
    コメント
    My mouth felt really weird now but that didn't really matter seeing as how I didn't need to eat anymore but now I had a weird thirst for blood but I could keep it under control."
    Life At The End Of Death
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  • MoonBreath
    MoonBreath2yr
    コメント

    DeviantArt on twitter is the owner

    ...What formed out of it was a red and black spear, around the tip of the spear was red and on one of the side of the tip of the spear was a red dragon, also the long handle of the spear on the bottom had horn like features on it that was red and black, and the top handle of it also had weird features as well.
    Life At The End Of Death
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  • MoonBreath
    MoonBreath2yr
    コメント

    This image is not mine btw, its just the spear the mc uses and i took it off google

    ...What formed out of it was a red and black spear, around the tip of the spear was red and on one of the side of the tip of the spear was a red dragon, also the long handle of the spear on the bottom had horn like features on it that was red and black, and the top handle of it also had weird features as well.
    Life At The End Of Death
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  • MoonBreath
    MoonBreath2yr
    コメント

    Obviously the MC wont be able to use all these abilities right away, he will have to grow and get stronger.

    Ch -2 3 elements mc has for now explantion
    Life At The End Of Death
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  • MoonBreath
    MoonBreath2yr
    コメント

    Read next sentence.

    この段落は削除されました。
    Life At The End Of Death
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  • MoonBreath
    MoonBreath2yr
    コメント

    I will put the explanation of each element in a auxillirary chapter because all of it is too much to explain in 1 chapter

    After all the info of each elements were explained to me I was left speechless while still taking in the information
    Life At The End Of Death
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