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Anything less than perfect is suffering?
I meant, what did he lose during this scene to act this agitated lol He is already living a life much better than his past one
or like you know, give him some time to adjust. It's just the second chapter lol
I would suggest checking out some google articles on paragraph spacing, and punctuation.
21 is still too young for marriage , silly father!
The start is nice even though this chapter feels a little too short
The story starts off well, with great language and interesting tropes. Looking forward to seeing more of Jaden and Celine, good job, author!
Haha, they are fun to read XD Looking ahead to more chapters ^^
oh or you can just ease her nervousness by getting close to her