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AngryBamboo

AngryBamboo

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Noob Writer

2022-02-12 入りましたVietnam
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111h

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5
瞬間
34
  • AngryBamboo
    AngryBamboo2 years ago
    発表

    Didn't expect to find a mystery novel in our website. Usually they all turn out to be isekai in disguise. Very good book keep it up author! Can't wait for more.

  • AngryBamboo
    AngryBamboo2 years ago
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    After so long I finally found such an interesting romance novel to kill my free time! It only took me 3 chapters to like the FL. Very hilarious FL I love her! The pacing was also good. I can't believe this's the author first work.

  • AngryBamboo
    AngryBamboo2 years ago
    コメント

    I like FL already.

  • AngryBamboo
    AngryBamboo2 years ago
    コメント

    Drink more water FMC

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  • AngryBamboo
    AngryBamboo2 years ago
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    Dead by facepalm

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  • AngryBamboo
    AngryBamboo2 years ago
    発表

    The story is good. I really like the relationship between FMC and her husband. And chapter 5... uh oh that was pretty hot. There's some grammar mistakes, I hope the author'll do some grammar update later on.

  • AngryBamboo
    AngryBamboo2 years ago
    発表

    Shameless cutest author here. Following the tradition, I give my novel 5 stars. Whether this novel is truly good or not, it's your decision. I'll try my best to improve the quality and the release speed (No promise though :D cute author is busy).

  • AngryBamboo
    AngryBamboo2 years ago
    発表

    Not really my cup of tea. Author tried to deliver a lesson to the readers. Which was ok, this was more like of a simple short story than a novel. If one day you feel like reading something that has some philosophy sense you could spent sometime reading this. The story was pretty short so it won't take much time.

  • AngryBamboo
    AngryBamboo2 years ago
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    This is just my personal opinion, so judge it on your own. Just like the title indicated, the story was very chaotic I don't know if the author deliberated on this or it was just very weird situations and conversations. I don’t know anything about Muslim but Mr.Beck situation was very strange. And why did those 2 strange men suddenly become his guards and why did he instantly accept to be their boss no question ask, that was very weird. Mr.Bee was kidnapped by a stranger, but then he just casually sipped tea without any sign of panic. Mr Beck. who turned out to be Mr Bee dad, and then Mr.Bee just accepted it?? The father he has never seen in his life and he just casually accept the man who hurt and kidnaped him? But then why does he have to smack his son on the head? Couldn’t they just have a normal conversation somewhere (I guess if Mr.Bee didn’t turn out to be his son he would kill him? If he needed the hair for DNA test there are many way to get it ) How can a regular officer said he could erase every charges on Mr.Beck? The conversations between characters were too long. This style was very hard to read and comprehend. Again, I don't know anything about Muslim but religious and political aspects shouldn't be mentioned directly. Even if you feel you have to, you should at least change the name of the religion/country or something like that.

  • AngryBamboo
    AngryBamboo2 years ago
    に返信 Themba_Langa

    Thank you for the power stones

The Strongest Thief

What could be worse than death? The answer was the loneliness of never being able to die. Of billions upon billions upon billions of creatures across worlds and realities, no matter how powerful they were they would always be consumed by that feeling. It was the true terror that would devour any living entities until their mind shattered and turn to void. What happened if there was a creature, a person, a human who could overcome the fear of nothingness? In the world of Loriana, the world of magic, the world of endless battles between heroes and demon lords. The young boy Torei summoned with his group of friends and his unrequited love. Like any Isekai transmigrators, they were given powers and fame. Well, except for Torei his class was a thief, a lowly infamous class only for thugs, and criminals. What could Torei do in this cruel world filled with endless hatred, suffering as a thief? Cough cough I stare at myself in the mirror for a long time after writing this synopsis. I think I'm serious this time about WSA contest I'm not a native English speaker so expect some grammar errors in my novels I will try to improve with time. If this goes well I'm gonna update a more thoughtfully editing version later. Q&A: Will this has harem? (a small and complicated harem I would say, cause at least one of them was just playing with the MC, even if there's a harem MC gonna choose only 1 love interest, there'll be no harem ending) Will this have NTR? (No) Is the cover yours? (No, I'm just borrowing it please don't kill me) Final word I'm a newbie writer so please be easy on me.

AngryBamboo · ファンタジー
4.8
45 Chs