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Didn't expect to find a mystery novel in our website. Usually they all turn out to be isekai in disguise. Very good book keep it up author! Can't wait for more.
After so long I finally found such an interesting romance novel to kill my free time! It only took me 3 chapters to like the FL. Very hilarious FL I love her! The pacing was also good. I can't believe this's the author first work.
I like FL already.
The story is good. I really like the relationship between FMC and her husband. And chapter 5... uh oh that was pretty hot. There's some grammar mistakes, I hope the author'll do some grammar update later on.
Shameless cutest author here. Following the tradition, I give my novel 5 stars. Whether this novel is truly good or not, it's your decision. I'll try my best to improve the quality and the release speed (No promise though :D cute author is busy).
Not really my cup of tea. Author tried to deliver a lesson to the readers. Which was ok, this was more like of a simple short story than a novel. If one day you feel like reading something that has some philosophy sense you could spent sometime reading this. The story was pretty short so it won't take much time.
This is just my personal opinion, so judge it on your own. Just like the title indicated, the story was very chaotic I don't know if the author deliberated on this or it was just very weird situations and conversations. I don’t know anything about Muslim but Mr.Beck situation was very strange. And why did those 2 strange men suddenly become his guards and why did he instantly accept to be their boss no question ask, that was very weird. Mr.Bee was kidnapped by a stranger, but then he just casually sipped tea without any sign of panic. Mr Beck. who turned out to be Mr Bee dad, and then Mr.Bee just accepted it?? The father he has never seen in his life and he just casually accept the man who hurt and kidnaped him? But then why does he have to smack his son on the head? Couldn’t they just have a normal conversation somewhere (I guess if Mr.Bee didn’t turn out to be his son he would kill him? If he needed the hair for DNA test there are many way to get it ) How can a regular officer said he could erase every charges on Mr.Beck? The conversations between characters were too long. This style was very hard to read and comprehend. Again, I don't know anything about Muslim but religious and political aspects shouldn't be mentioned directly. Even if you feel you have to, you should at least change the name of the religion/country or something like that.
Thank you for the power stones