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"Naruhodo" - Naruhodo
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AuthoriTet2dコメントat the start there were some grammatical and spelling errors. but those seemed to have been fixed already, in the following chapters.
So, I'm reaching out once more to see if there's anything specific that you think could be improved. Are there grammar mistakes that are bothering you? Are the chapters too short or too long? Are there any issues within the story that you think need addressing? Or is there something else entirely that's on your mind?- AuthoriTet2dコメント
that's not how it works
However, because the game design concept was too low, he was dismissed by the big industry and even smaller ones, and he was depressed at the end he don't have choice but to do suicide. - AuthoriTet2mthに返信 Ryuukage
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Warning: It's harem, for those who care. I really enjoyed the story; I love these world simulator-type novels with management elements, and this scratched that itch. My only issue is that I felt like the author ran out of ideas, so they added arcs that were a totally different system—not the usual divine kingdom vs. divine kingdom stuff, not even cards. An example would be the World of Warcraft-like system in that one world where the MC got a class, leveled up, and so on. It threw me off, and I didn't particularly like it as I read this book for the management and simulator parts. Also, I stopped at chapter 400+ as it turned into a harem. I don't like harems. But if you don't mind that, then I really recommend reading this in your spare time. It's a great read.
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math not mathing 😭
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bro is spitting facts
"Is this what love is?" Li Qingshan mumbled.detailMax-Level Learning Ability: Facing The Cliff And Repenting For 80 Years東方 · Girl In Short Skirt - AuthoriTet3mthコメント
the spineless sect strikes again
Little Nine lifted her chin and said proudly, "I'm a treasure of the Yuhua Sect. Master already decided that I will be the Eldest Senior Sister of the newest generation of disciples, and he even gave me the best treatment so that I can cultivate well. How can he bear to hit me?"detailMax-Level Learning Ability: Facing The Cliff And Repenting For 80 Years東方 · Girl In Short Skirt - AuthoriTet3mthコメント
why does the author keep making the spineless sect look good smh. from the moment you made the plot, the spineless sect will never be redeemable. they are spineless af and cowards who will not stand by you in your time of need. get professional help author because I feel like you are projecting an irl situation you have right now. toxic relationships aren't cool.
One must admit that the Yuhua Sect had not been lucky. Two of their geniuses had been disabled one after the other.detailMax-Level Learning Ability: Facing The Cliff And Repenting For 80 Years東方 · Girl In Short Skirt - AuthoriTet3mthに返信 AuthoriTetCh 4 Threatened by Demonic Cultivator, Reward Is a Sword Technique
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that's how profound it is
As he began to ponder the four lines of the mantra, he thought to himself: "This mantra taught by my Master is indeed extraordinary. It's like a poem with profound profound meanings that holds infinite martial arts wisdom." - AuthoriTet4mthに返信 Neil_Ads
I see, makes sense now
Their powers and raw strength should be similar, so it was only a matter of who had a better summoner to determine the winner. - AuthoriTet4mthコメント
how 💀isn't the bronze one a tier higher
Their powers and raw strength should be similar, so it was only a matter of who had a better summoner to determine the winner. - AuthoriTet4mthに返信 Clay_Champion
Philippines is in Asia 💀
"Okay, be careful, Richard. Lock the doors, don't let anyone in. Do you understand?" - AuthoriTet6mthコメントこの本は削除されました。
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