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English is not my native language, but I am doing my best to learn.
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Well, with the way he acts, you don't need to be a genius to know that. The only reason he was not discovered in TBATE was because the reincarnation culture was only held by the fenix asuras.
Well, this is Kiyotaka, his past is shady and he's tired, so he wants to live a normal life. It's not my original MC, it's a crosover, so I have to stay true to the characters.
I'm sorry, webnovel sucks, it doesn't send me notifications, so I just saw your comment when I was reviewing chapters. As for your question, she is about 5 ft. and for the other question I will resume a weekly chapter from now on, so no, I won't drop it.
lol, just like that
Thank you for the detailed review, I appreciate it very much. Regarding the update frequency, I plan to improve it, at least one chapter a week since what would be "The prologue" if you can call it this way, is about to finish, and then the novel will focus on taking down the protagonist and stealing heroines. Regarding the world construction. It's an aspect that I realized a little late, since basically this was my first novel and I skipped several things that I could have added, so an apology for that and I've improved in future chapters. The system thing is a good suggestion, but mainly I did it that way because if I put all the skills of the main characters, I would have a list of several pages of pure things like "Apprenticeship, boxing, archery, manners, etc.".
I understand what you mean, honestly I just put the first two languages that came to my mind lol