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Good first chapter.

Good chapter, clear outline, and is well thought out.

That's a good first chapter. Interestingly, this story has so much potential, but it could be a bit more descriptive in certain parts. Probably could use pathetic fallacy to create more of an attachment (just a suggestion), but I like it.

I like how he isn't overpowered or gaining leveling up too fast.

I liked the chapter. I especially like the way you implement your system. It is easy to differentiate the system from the overall narrative. It was a good read. Just what I needed after starting Sweet Home Season 2.

Very interesting so far.

It really wasn't, but it's currently being edited. So look out for that. The ending might change a bit, and it will definitely be less confusing. I just updated chapters 1-11.

Thank you! I glad you enjoyed it.

Thank you for the feedback. This will be noted for future novels. It would be greatly appreciated if you could expound on what made it the shittiest story.