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It's not very good, I read 800 chapters. I have no idea how this book is top 5 on Webnovel, so lets go over all the problems 1) Chapter are too short: Kinda arbitrary, and maybe it's because I've been reading on RR for the past month, but the chapters are very short. Also some of them are just status screens. I would be enraged if I spent money for a whole chapter of just status screens. 2) It's too complicated. At the beginning we are introduced to the Status screen and it is filled with like 3 different ways of leveling up. Now this might be fine later in the novel, but this is only the beginning chapters. The author claims that he took inspiration from Super Gene and The Lord's Empire. Now I haven't read much of Super Gene (only like 50 chapters), but I have read The Lord's Empire. If the author wants to implement both systems, I do not see how that is a good system. The power system of The Lord's Empire was incredibly complicated and didn't make much sense after about 500 chapters. but to add the Super Gene system on top of that? What a recipe for disaster... 3) The way the author writes. The author can't seem to figure out a way to balance the MC so he just intentionally nerfs him. Like he enters a dungeon and was incredibly successful? Sike! Everyone else was training for 3 months while he was in there for only three days, so he isn't actually that powerful. What a stupid way to balance the MC, not to mention that this happens like 3 times. The author also comes up with other ways the MC gets nerfed, some of which he walks right into. Quite concerning considering the MC is supposed to be a super genius. 4) The MC has too much stacked against him. Like I understand the MC needs some enemies, but basically the whole Universe is against him for being talented (which he actually isn't in the grand scheme of things) and he has like no allies. Not a very enticing read should I say so myself. 5) Slow progress: In order to get the best foundation, the MC hasn't used one of the ways for him to get powerful (the level system). This is incredibly frustrating. Like he has been level 0 for the whole novel (we are at 800 chapters btw). I would honestly call this bad design on the author's part. I'm positive he could've tweaked the already too complicated and confusing power system just a bit to allow him to level up. It's boring to see the MC at level 0 fighting people and monsters 30-50 levels above him. In conclusion, this novel is not very good. The power system is too complicated, the MC is constantly getting nerfed, and he has the most impossible odds I have ever seen stacked against him. Kinda weird considering everyone on Earth started at the same time. Anyways do not waste your time on this novel. 1/5
I think I might have gotten heart demons from reading this. Fellow daoists please let the poison tester sect warn you out of this one. Nonetheless, if you possess any valuable treasures, submit them to this seat first. Should you return alive, they shall be yours to claim.
Now I’m not saying that female players wouldn’t be screaming, but I’m pretty sure both genders would likely have people screaming, so rephrasing the sentence to “Many players” or “A few players” or even “Some more weak-willed players” would sound better and appeal to a wider audience.
It’s a pretty good novel. I’ve been following your stories for a while now and you have yet to disappoint. Now this is not some Pultizer Prize level novel, but I would don’t think anybody expects it to be. I can tell that you have been inspired by RSSG and the like and have put a very interesting twist on an otherwise over saturated and cliche genre. Keep up the good work!
Uhhh, that’s kinda op
I’m kinda confused. If there are players on the other continent wouldn’t everyone know? (Because of the forums)
RSSG is still ongoing, the main story ended, but there is a side story. Tbh the side story is pretty much the sequel