ImSadistic

how about loving the sports but sucking at them so you can never play them seriously like you’d like to

this MC better not be a pushover… she saved that dude and left him to die

my early prediction is that pink has something to do with the system

his poor mom coming home to see that

someone should take over this story and give it the writing and updates it deserves. so much potential here

mfs be having that storm trooper aim

Incredible story. I love the personality of the MC and the many members of his harem all have their own stories and uses throughout the plot

just checked and saw you have the cultivation ranks set out already. thanks for that!

Already wrote about what I love so now i'm going to add what I think can be improved and hopefully the author can take my suggestions into account. 1. Yun says he doesn't want to rely on Ling Xi too much however it's really all he has done so far whether it comes to dealing with every enemy that comes up or something else. 2. I would like to see Yun truly start getting combat experience by fighting other cultivators, however this isn't a huge knock because I really enjoy how the story is realistic as he has just became a cultivator so he clearly should be way behind when it comes to fighting people who grew up in a cultivation family or sect. 3. I would love for the world building to be a bit better and be explained in depth at some point. I can understand wanting to have a layer of mystery which makes the reader more interested and attached to the world building however it is a bit confusing that we know of the cultivation realm where strong cultivators are however there has been mentions of another realm above that where the Mo family fled to however we know nothing about even the cultivator realm yet so it feels a bit odd having something like that thrown in already. Keep up the good work author, just some personal suggestions. PS: I would love if you made a page that has all of the cultivation realms/tiers as it can get confusing which realm is above which

loving this so far. love how the system is implemented with a good shop feature, and a currency system that counts the money he earns on earth and not just some electronic points from dual cultivating only. I also love how he needs to hit a required amount of yin and yang qi in order to break through rather than other cultivation novels that make leveling up and getting stronger confusing. the relationships so far are built on true feelings. please keep up the great work and consistent updates author-kun