Grimkin

It would be funny to see him use the Grimblade aura blade skill and see what happens. I’m only now realizing that those wraps will further alienate him from the clan.

I was so worried he would become a brawler or boxer. Martial artists who use their entire body is much more fun and interesting.

I like this. Defiance of the Fall, Primal Hunter and other System APOC novels similar to that use the first mechanic too much, to the point of abuse to crutch their OP protagonists above others.

He should get more bang for his buck in this dungeon with his genes in a soft state. It depends on if he can overcome the snake within the week.

In regard to the ‘rising’ part, I’m hoping for a quetzalcoatl and not a dragon tbh. Generic and overdone.

Brown is such a boring name.

I’m assuming once a beast has leveled enough, it doesn’t need as much sleep.

Comments throughout this chapter did not pass the LitTPG check.

I’m confused. How does the mother look similar to Astrid but she had no blood relation to the clan? I could see his mother coming from another reputable clan along with Astrid to explain away their familiar looks but from what it sounds like, she was some normal common woman.

I was seriously thinking about dropping this. Your comments convinced me to push through with the cringe.