The only flaw that I see is the rapid progress of the story and skipping the details and interactions between the characters in a deeper sense. Yes, you are trying to change Kiyotka, but give him some deep feelings. Thank you, and I will continue to support you.

Oh man, where did the author go? The story is good and has room for development, but like most stories, he will leave it

Oh man, if you don't have the butterfly effect, what's the point of MC? You could have gotten him into a relationship with Clarke or Octavia for the sake of drama. Anyway, better luck in the future, don't give up.

I have a question: will you still only upload one chapter per day?

Longer chapter pls

I read the entire novel Shadow Slave, and I admire the way you write. I just want to give you my point of view. Do not make MC too strong too quickly. Give him time to grow and greater risks than the novel to make it balanced. I really like his character, so no comments. I hope you continue and I will support you as much as I can.

Thank for the chapter and keep going

The story is very nice but if you can keep write you can make a very good novel and i read it all .........

I just hope you keep going and finish it

A very nice narration and your background about the world is good. I hope you will complete this work