UnpaidAuthor
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UnpaidAuthor1yr発表Writing this review 3 chapters in, with the prologue being more of a teaser into the MC's personality, speaking of which is my cup of tea. The chapters are very large, which can be off-putting to some, so hopefully this can be improved on in the future. Overall, a well-presented story so far, keep it up.
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Lmao
"Said person who peed his pants was your crush only a few minutes ago. Whatever happened to your feelings towards him? Last I heard you wanted him and you to become a couple. I wonder how well that went?" I counter back mockingly. - UnpaidAuthor1yr発表
Xianxia isn't my cup of tea, but it is clear that the author has put a lot of thought into their work in terms of characters and world-building. The writing quality needs work, but I'm sure it will improve as the story goes on. Also very refreshing to see a female lead.
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You're*
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Maybe it would be better to add this before the above paragraph?
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I doubt your kidnappers require consent
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Share it with the rest of us ^_^
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Nice introduction chapter, but the MC's name wasn't revealed?
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What's this supposed to represent?
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- UnpaidAuthor1yr発表
Strongly recommend. Loving the story thus far. Please keep going. Likes: The author is very descriptive. Characters have their own personality and do not seem forced. Little to no grammar mistakes. Werewolves, Vampires, Blood. Dislikes: At times, it can be hard to follow how much times have passed between scenes.
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Was I really that weak?*
この段落は削除されました。 - UnpaidAuthor1yrコメントThe vampire squirmed as he looked at me. His face blushing as if he were suffering from pure euphoria. He crushed the heart, letting the blood drop down into his mouth.
- UnpaidAuthor1yrに返信 Violet_Ivory"I still can't believe the ending of One Piece, truly brilliant. And it's a shame Hunter x Hunter was never finished, I wanted to learn more about the dark continent."
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First time creating a novel. Hopefully, you find it enjoyable. No systems, No harem. MC will have to discover and experiment with his powers by himself which may take a while, so sorry if it feels dragged on. Writing this review 5 chapters in. Please leave reviews, add to your collection and vote with power stones if you enjoy.
- UnpaidAuthor1yrに返信 Abayomi_AtoyegbeCh 1 Awakening