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An unpaid author based in the United Kingdom.
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Writing this review 3 chapters in, with the prologue being more of a teaser into the MC's personality, speaking of which is my cup of tea. The chapters are very large, which can be off-putting to some, so hopefully this can be improved on in the future. Overall, a well-presented story so far, keep it up.
Lmao
Xianxia isn't my cup of tea, but it is clear that the author has put a lot of thought into their work in terms of characters and world-building. The writing quality needs work, but I'm sure it will improve as the story goes on. Also very refreshing to see a female lead.
You're*
Maybe it would be better to add this before the above paragraph?
I doubt your kidnappers require consent
Share it with the rest of us ^_^
Nice introduction chapter, but the MC's name wasn't revealed?
What's this supposed to represent?
Strongly recommend. Loving the story thus far. Please keep going. Likes: The author is very descriptive. Characters have their own personality and do not seem forced. Little to no grammar mistakes. Werewolves, Vampires, Blood. Dislikes: At times, it can be hard to follow how much times have passed between scenes.
Was I really that weak?*
First time creating a novel. Hopefully, you find it enjoyable. No systems, No harem. MC will have to discover and experiment with his powers by himself which may take a while, so sorry if it feels dragged on. Writing this review 5 chapters in. Please leave reviews, add to your collection and vote with power stones if you enjoy.