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So far it's been great. Please, no harem, this couple is great, they match each other. ❤️ In relation to other universes, just don't be generic and meaningless, entering a universe that has no connection, that makes sense to the story you created. The pace has been great, satisfying and not too slow. As for deviating from the script quickly or slowly, you did a good job, I trust your judgment.
Try *not* to follow the rules that others follow, it doesn't need to be something outside the box, but within the context of what would make sense for the story. Sorry for the bad English, it's not my mother tongue.
É ótimo, não deixe que a crítica do idiota Rexluz te impeça de ler, uma das melhores fics do universo de GOT que já li. It's great, don't let idiot Rexluz's review stop you from reading, one of the best fics in the GOT universe I've ever read.