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Jaywalker4dコメントit sorta makes sense, considering that Sidious is making the death star that he would look at other weapons of mass destruction for inspiration or ideas. so of course he would know about the shadow generator.
(AN: I don't really like writing edgy stuff but sometimes it's a bit unavoidable. I try to make it less edgy and more emotional, but idk. Jaden has been used to being able to bring people back from near death with his abilities, this is a wake up call for him that he can't save everyone. Sometimes you have to accept life as it is, even if it's painful. Mass shadow generator will be making an appearance I plan to change canon to when it comes to how Jabiim ends cause if you read my stuff you'll know I hate canon rehashes. This is a prototype mass shadow generator so it'll work differently than the original. Anyway I hope you enjoyed the chapter.)- Jaywalker22d発表
I really love this fan fic, The MC makes the series set. Feel like you as An author has really thought out. The MC is a good guy, but not in a way that feels forced or overly righteous. It's like if a good guy was born in a bad place, with the chance to do something right. And I can't wait for the reveal of when everyone finds out he's not actually a jedi.
- Jaywalker1mthコメント
conspiracy theory time, the dnd game is going to be the original story he writes.
I remembered back to the first Dungeons and Dragons game Matt had invited me to. It was originally started by Jack, John and Joanna's older brother; he was the GM. But this year, he had gone to college, so Matt decided he was going to be the new GM. - Jaywalker1mthコメント
loving this fic keep it up, and night shifts are tough believe me i know. Also looking forward to when MC can get his revenge, nothing extreme like destroying the whole family he doesn't seem like the type. But instead just getting strong enough to where they cant push him around.[img=recommend]
Ch 7 7 - Jaywalker2mthコメント
So his name is the same name as her father, That is magnito's name right?
Another thing, after this chapter, just so you guys are happy, I'll use simple Erik in narration and he'll be called Eirikyr by not-so-close people. Close friends will call him Erik. - Jaywalker2mthに返信 VibingElder
For real, I legit see comments where they are like, You should just kill your whole family cause they're only gonna hold you back. It's so dumb.
I closed my eyes and put a hand near my chest. "You can leave your family to me. I'll make sure they're all alright and taken care of. I know you died unexpectedly, but I hope you can rest in peace." - Jaywalker4mthコメント
my bro got a catchphrase now
"Is this how you do it?" - Jaywalker4mthコメントCh 5 News!
- Jaywalker5mthに返信 Bronz_Deck
if his circuit aren't awakend how is he using his skills?
And if those with a keen eye noticed a discrepancy in Noah's status it is intentional. - Jaywalker5mthコメント
yeah the thing about the south is if they dont like you or do like you, you'll know it will be obvious. it wont be a secret how they feel about you.
What I find the weirdest thing about our family definitely has to do with Dad; he dresses up just like how you'd expect a racist person to dress: Jeans, boots, shirts with the American flag, a bald eagle, or a gun, and lastly, a bass pro fishing hat; to top it all off, he's got a southern accent. At first glance, you'd think he's a racist, but when you see him walking around while hugging his Japanese wife and holding his black child by the hand with a smile, some people show shocked expressions, which I find funny. - Jaywalker5mthコメント
obi wan deserves a win, guy lost so much he should get to be happy
Especially since I ship them. It's like the meme: If it fits it ships. - Jaywalker5mthコメント
get 👏that 👏word👏 count 👏
mine mine mine mine mine mine mine mine mine mine mine mine mine mine mine mine mine mine. - Jaywalker6mthコメント
take a break, dont post so much, or link a way for you to make some money, these are the ways ppl stop burnout.
[Imma be honest. I'm losing my will to write.] - Jaywalker6mthに返信 joe_M
i mean everyone sat back and watched, at least she was sorry for it
'Now that I felt how those words feel like, I guess I was being an asshole.' - Jaywalker6mthコメント
man i hate when people will put it in the tag only to change it later, makes it feel like you only did it to get more views and then when it worked get rid of it saying you changed your mind. no hate its your story write what you want i just dont like feeling lied to
この本は削除されました。 - Jaywalker6mthに返信 Life_sa_Beach_
Well, now im hungry 😕
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