Golden_Essence
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Golden_Essence20d発表Hey guys, shameless author here. I know this book is just at it's early stage, but I... I would appreciate every feedback however it comes. that's how I know I'm doing the right thing. My books is pretty much out of place on a platform like this one. I know that well enough. But I'm trying my best, to make sure it's enjoyable. It's not the usual fantasy stuff, still, I'm trying... Really I am. Sleepless nights, everything I'm sacrificing to make sure this book is something. But I can't do that without you. I need your feedbacks. I need to know I'm doing it right. Please. I may and may not have cried writing this review.
- Golden_Essence6mth発表
Okay, okay, I’ll admit it—I’m shamelessly diving into this. But hey, here’s the scoop: this book, it’s been my obsession. When I kicked things off, it was a bit like trying to walk on stilts—awkward and wobbly. But hang tight, folks, 'cause as the story goes on, it smooths out like a well-worn path. I’ve dialed down the fancy writing for a smoother ride. So, I’m asking for your patience. Trust me, this story's got layers. It’s a wild journey, and I promise it gets better. This plot? Oh, it’s a beast! A rollercoaster of twists and turns that'll leave you spinning. Buckle up, 'cause we’re in for one heck of a ride. Stick around, and let’s dive into this adventure together. Golden_Essense [img=recommend]
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I appreciate, I really hope you'd actually give my book a chance.
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Sure, I already like how it started and I'm willing to continue. I also, I'm an author, I don't know if you remember my book: Strength of Chaos. I'm hoping you could continue reading while I do the same here. I promise to give honest reviews.
The two shadowy figures loomed in the darkness, their faces concealed by masks. They were agents of a highly classified organization, with a singular goal: to gain world domination. These agents were not known by their names, but instead by numbers, further adding to their mystique. - Golden_Essence11mthコメント
You kind of ruined the mystery for us here
The two shadowy figures loomed in the darkness, their faces concealed by masks. They were agents of a highly classified organization, with a singular goal: to gain world domination. These agents were not known by their names, but instead by numbers, further adding to their mystique. - Golden_Essence11mthに返信 ruined_diaper20
LOL. Thanks please point the error out I'll appreciate
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Maybe you could just point it out so I can fix it please
A solemn nod accompanied Major Philip's words, signifying the gravity of the situation. He opened the folder, passing around the pictures to the generals. A heavy - Golden_Essence11mthに返信 ruined_diaper20
Thanks i really appreciate you taking the time to read my book. This is actually my first book, and I'm always trying my best to make it better 😌
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The chapter had been edited, please read again. Arigato
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I promise you, it gets better. Pardon the grammatical errors.
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