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I'm not lazy, I'm just conserving energy.
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Vanitas_245hコメント- Sequence 5 Confluence -> Sequence 4 Raphael (System Pathway)- Vanitas_246hコメント
I should have asked it in the last chapter but didn’t Arthur discuss about the Black Hero with Audrey. If so then, how is Klein able to pretend to be the Black Hero or Black Emperor without the Blasphemy Card. After all you did mention about the Tarot cards and in Audrey’s pov she gave her Tarot Club the credit for Black Hero. And in the last chapter you have mentioned Blasphemy Card and Klein not possessing them. So, how did impersonate as Black Emperor?
Ch 41 An Angel - Vanitas_241dコメント
When did this happen? Wasn’t his characteristic corrupted in the novel because of Klein. Though I don’t remember the name of the item, it was something that reproduced True Creators Mumblings.
He thought the Beyonder characteristic had been tainted by the True Creator. Arthur crouched down and picked up the characteristic. - Vanitas_241dコメント
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Author(How is this chapter) - Vanitas_241dコメント
Wasn’t this supposed to happen after Sherlock Moriarty arrives to the capital.
Meanwhile, Arthur, having achieved his goal, reclined upon his bed with a sense of satisfaction, his thoughts already turning to the possibilities that lay ahead. The newspaper in his hands served as a reminder of the world outside, its headlines a stark contrast to the tranquility of his realm. "The Night of Bloody Demon, the Killer demon strikes again!" the headline screamed, its urgency a stark reminder of the chaos that plagued the city. With a newfound sense of purpose, Arthur formulated a plan, his mind ablaze with possibilities. The demon wreaking havoc in his domain would soon meet its match. - Vanitas_241dコメント"I choose Igris," I muttered inwardly.
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Your pacing though a bit rushed is good. This way we can enjoy the fic without hoping to get bored by mundane scenes and slow pacing. The pacing is great enough to warrant readers continued attention to the fic.
Ten months passed in the blink of an eye, and I found myself at Sequence 5 of my original pathway and Sequence 6 of the White Tower Pathway. My priority was getting the Sequence 5 potion of the White Tower pathway, which is Mysticism Magister. - Vanitas_241mthコメント
Just a doubt, wasn't Trinity the top Guild in Yggdrasil followed by World Searcher? Still a great fic. Hope you continue it. I am finding a lot of good Overlord fic nowadays. The Overlord of Madness, is this the fic that you were talking about in the chapter?
Ch 2 Chapter 1: All4One - Vanitas_241mthに返信 Grizz_Rex_89
Goku in his base form or super saiyan form would get wasted in dxd but with Super Saiyan God Red, Super Saiyan God Blue, MUI form. Goku solos the verse in MUI form. Even GoD are mostly powerless in front of MUI. Those GoD who could sneeze a planet away.
"Fuck. Fuck! FUCK! You could have told me that when I was making that choice, you shitty Game! I wouldn't have selected High School DxD in that case! How costly was it anyway?' - Vanitas_241mthコメントEventually, the mind can only endure solitude for so long before it begins to fray.
- Vanitas_242mthに返信 Anime_God_4483
Yep
She saw his gaze and undid her transformation. Her hair seemed to lose their strength as it turned to her normal red color before being blown slightly sideways by the wind. - Vanitas_242mthコメントCh 12 12. World Enemy
- Vanitas_242mthコメントCh 43 Chapter 37 - Turtle
- Vanitas_242mthに返信 sparta55
Unless you find yourself giving birth to a child. Except that, everything else should be fine. Or you get your insides eaten by the outer God.
Till then, take care, my love.] - Vanitas_242mthコメント
1. Saber 2. Scathach 3. Ruler, Jeanne d'Arc 4. Anastasia Nikolaevna Romanova 5. Morgan le Fay 6. Medusa 7. Medea 8. Enkidu 9. Karna 10. Shiroko Terror 11. Ozymandias 12. Hercules 13. Godzilla 14. King Ghidorah 15. Camelot Knights 16. Florence NIGHTINGALE Most of them are from Fate.
Author Note: I am open to suggestions about the Guild name. I thought of naming it Sefirah Castle, but I had another idea of naming a floor with it. Also, suggest NPCs that I can add here. - Vanitas_242mth発表
A great book to be honest. Recommended to everyone who is a fan of Ben 10 and Black Clover. The only thing that I am not satisfied within this story is you nerfing Ben's powers. You could have taken another approach of randomising every transformation rather than locking his aliens. I for one am not a fan of fics where the MC is nerfed. But this is still a great story nonetheless.
- Vanitas_242mthコメントCh 39 Chapter 36: Meeting Valentine And Her Past.
- Vanitas_242mthコメントHey hey, that's making people too envious. Isn't that one of the best endings? Like a certain light novel, laying hands on both Louise and Tabitha and still be fine? Should I stop chasing the donkan type and learn from him...?