lazybod
I like high-school DXD :) Second book will be GoT Upload schedule (New): I will upload every other day (If i feel like it) Schedule start: 30th July
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lazybod1yrコメントこの本は削除されました。- lazybod1yrコメントRyuu held a bamboo flute that he bought from a vendor and decided to try playing a little song. He placed the flute into his lips and soon a soothing sound could be heard that seemed to heal their fatigue.
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Dr Veritas has been acting weird lately
For Harley and Dr. Veritas, their loyalty towards him stemmed from love which meant it was still technically possible for him to lose that love they had for him and he knew this. - lazybod1yrに返信 VenerableChingchow
Yeah I probs will at some point, you kinda lose motivation for a bit, it’s a come and go sorta thing for me I guess, but yeah I should think so
Thankfully Irene won't directly participate in the rating game... So they maybe still have a chance... - lazybod1yrコメントThankfully Irene won't directly participate in the rating game... So they maybe still have a chance...
- lazybod1yrコメント"I'm gonna bend your mother over my knee, shave her ass hair, roll it up in a blunt and make you smoke it."
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Outstanding piece of fanfic work here! Truss me! The character development and world building is great and only gets better in the later chaps so its really clear to see how much you've evolved as an author :) I started reading this fic about 3-4 days ago and currently it has approximately 700k words and im still hooked, which...I mean...Its usually a good sign of quality so take my word for it to those who are thinking of reading :) I look forward to the future chapters author-san and you should be really proud of what you've produced. Love it and good job once more!
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I am also curious...How DID he actually get through the barrier? I know he upped the defense and has stated that its the safest place in the world previously. I cant remember properly so forgive me, but based of what I can remember from other barriers and such, that he has made them so only EXTREMELY powerful being can get through. Hmm I wonder, maybe a buff from nylathorpe (or however its spelt lol)? Just came back to this after finishing the chap to think some more :) I look forward to more! Great work Author-san!
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I personally really like this story! It has great world and character building and I like the integration of the power systems. It kept me hooked and wanting to read more! The quality of your writing is also very good (lacks many mistakes) which made it easy to read and flowed well! Great story! Keep it up! :)
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It has good baseline story and has quite a lot of potential, but personally I had to stop reading due to the grammar and the fact that some of the things the mc says is just a bit weird to me. I wish you luck in your endeavours and i might pick it up again in the future to see how much you have improved with time!
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You can't correct someone's mistake in such a way and then make a mistake yourself XD
Arato: You will be named Vali (looking towards hazel eyed boy) and you will be named SPARDA (she said looking towards the red eyed boy/our protagonist). - lazybod2yrに返信 chaos_demon
I made changes for it to fit him, easier to inpliment
Ring's of Solomon added to inventory!- The 10 rings of Solomon. If all rings are worn, user can negate all magic. The rings will also give him great control over his mana and the way it flows. User will become a master of magic ! (Only descendant of Solomon may use the rings) - lazybod2yrに返信 chaos_demon
XD love that
"Can I help you?" Grayfia asked. "Yes please dear. I need to see-" I pulled up my hand and a notepad appeared in it with the name 'Sirzechs', I flipped through it after licking my finger and changing the pages. "Someone named, Sirzechs Lucifer. Parcel for delivery if it pleases you" I said to her with a smile. She stood expressionlessly, staring at me and I pouted. "Mouu! I thought it was quite funny. I need to speak to him about a couple things, wont take but a minute" I said with a thumbs up. - lazybod2yrに返信 Ototsu_Yume
Ahhh fair enoough, i havent seen RWBY, worth watching?
He had contacts in Japan and after buttering him up (get your mind out of the gutter) and expressing my interest in going there to study, he helped me out and got into contact with his contacts as well as my parents, he managed to get me an interview with a college there and to my surprise, I impressed them! They said I had potential with the course I wanted to follow and they would gladly accept me as long as I was able to get there on time for the semester to start. - lazybod2yrに返信 The_TubeCh 45 Hello little exorcists!
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:)
"Ara-ara~! Arthur-kun when do I get a kiss?" - lazybod2yrに返信 Donald_Ducx
Same lol
"Why would you choose to be angry at a sword for Robs sake? It has no feeling, no control over what it does! It is only an item used to kill, it does not choose! You tell me that this project was run by a man named Valper? Why not focus your anger on him? The man who planned you and your friends downfall? Over doing this, you chose to be angry at a FUCKING SWORD Kiba! Use that pretty head of yours all the girls love for something useful!" I examined, staring at the blonde knight. - lazybod2yrコメント
Here it is pahahahahaha
'Haha Ddraig you fucking legend! You boosted my stats above what they were before! Just look at some of my stats and that Pyromancy level now!' I said to Ddraig in my mind